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Is it more important to keep old friends than make new friend?
it is debatable whether keeping old friends is more important than making new friends. this is an intriguing question because opinions regarding this issue could be different relying on people's perspectives. In my opinion, however, I support that keeping old peers is more important for the following reasons.
First of all, it is more beneficial to keep old friends because they know about their friend well. they know what he doesn't like and what he likes. So he don't have to say about that. it is sometimes consolation. For example, when I was a high school students, I was very sad because of my exam scores. The friends who have known me for a long time tried to make me feel better by giving me some sweets and talk with me constantly . than my feeling became better and it was possible because they knew the way I relieve my stress and make my condition better. it is very thankful that when I am in a tough situation, there are some friends who give me real power and consolation. Therefore, it is more important to keep old peers.
Also, it is more advantageous to keep old companies because today, the world is becoming more competitive. To be specific, the more competitive the world is, the harder making new friends is. For instance, it is possible that the person I have thought my new friend has perceived me as a competitor. If I realized that, I would be hurt. And it is difficult to true to the new friends at frist because making friends needs time to get to know about them. making friends uses each other's energy, too. keeping old peers doesn't have to think about these disadvantages. Hence, it is better and more important to keep old friends.
In conclusion, I firmly believe that the benefits of keeping old friends outweighs those of making new friends.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, hence, however, if, regarding, so, therefore, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 15.1003584229 146% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 49.0 43.0788530466 114% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 52.1666666667 56% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1475.0 1977.66487455 75% => OK
No of words: 316.0 407.700716846 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.66772151899 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21620550194 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60908264398 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 212.727598566 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.503164556962 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 444.6 618.680645161 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.7275567454 48.9658058833 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.2380952381 100.406767564 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0476190476 20.6045352989 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.38095238095 5.45110844103 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 18.0 5.5376344086 325% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.483193787293 0.236089414692 205% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.161178765164 0.076458572812 211% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.154551033107 0.0737576698707 210% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.349823457263 0.150856017488 232% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.084692219188 0.0645574589148 131% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.1 11.7677419355 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 58.1214874552 126% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.1575268817 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.21 10.9000537634 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.78 8.01818996416 85% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 86.8835125448 55% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.002688172 60% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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