Some people believe that the museums and historic sites should be open for free for children under 18. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Historical monuments and museums are an important aspect of our past heritage, they depict our rich culture. Nowadays, most of the youngsters are not aware of the history of their own country, the hardships that our freedom fighters have gone through or the living style or houses of the past. Many people are of the view that the government should make the entry free for children under the age of 18, for promoting these historical places. According to me, this would be an inappropriate measure, in the following paragraphs; I will try to justify my viewpoint.
There is no doubt, that the children should be made aware of their own country's history, this would generate a feeling of patriotism and empathy towards our ancestors. However, to educate the youth, the government cannot sacrifice on the revenue that these sites generate. In a developling country like India, if the government would stop charging entry fees for young kids visiting the Taj Mahal, how would they bear the cost and maintain it? There are many people who are involved in the day to day work related to these monuments, their salary and other expenses also have to be taken care of.
One of the solution to this problem, could be giving discounts to the students and thus promoting these historical sites. Additionally, the government should emphasize schools to conduct regular trips to these places, so the students learn the value of these monuments and also acknowledge the efforts of the past generation.
To conclude, making the children realize the significance of history, visiting these monuments and museums is necessary, but the government or the people in charge of these places should come up with better plans that will be beneficial for everyone.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This phrase can sound awkward in English. Consider using 'in my opinion' or 'I think'.
Suggestion: In my opinion; I think
... for promoting these historical places. According to me, this would be an inappropriate measure...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...pathy towards our ancestors. However, to educate the youth, the government cannot...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s that will be beneficial for everyone.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, thus, no doubt
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1462.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 290.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04137931034 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65095051717 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.558620689655 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 451.8 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 42.195334825 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.909090909 106.682146367 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.3636363636 20.7667163134 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.81818181818 7.06120827912 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.207582650958 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0798760190225 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0935239410547 0.0667982634062 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129663146781 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0584622626281 0.056905535591 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.25 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.74 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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