An ailing patient should have easy access to his or her doctor’s record of treating similarly afflicted patients. Through gaining such access, the ailing patient may better determine whether the doctor is competent to treat that medical condition.
I completely disagree with the statement that ailing patients should have access to his or her doctor's record of treating similarly affected patients because the treatment given by doctor's to patients vary based on the individuals health conditions and situation.The disease may be common but the way the dosage is given varies from person to person based on internal health conditions and immunity power.
For example, let us consider a patient who is undergoing heart surgery and the way of treatment might be the same but the dosage of medicine and kind of medicine used varies based on his/her health reports.If the patient is suffering from diabetes or thyroid then the kind of medicine used is different and if he is having no other disease then the way differs.Hence patients should never be given access to the doctor's records of treating similarly affected patients.
Moreover, by giving such access, the patients mental condition will be affected because there will definitely be a change in the way each patient is treated and hence a doubt may arise in their mind regarding the treatment and it may lead to some other serious disorders.
Hence, there should not be a provision to patients to refer the doctor's records of treatment instead they can get to know the record of the count of simiar cases dealt and how many patients are been treated successfully and are out of danger.By doing so there will be a positivity generated in patients mind and he can relax himself down and the treatment will be undergone without much difficulties.
Finally, we can conclude that patients should not be given access to the doctors record of treating similarly afflicted patients as it will give a negative instinct in their mind which leads to additional disorders.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2020-01-20 | JENIRSHAH | 50 | view |
| 2019-12-29 | samruddh_shah | 50 | view |
| 2019-12-02 | Harshali_15 | 50 | view |
| 2019-11-30 | Masterji | 66 | view |
| 2019-11-26 | sarahaduwa | 66 | view |
- An ailing patient should have easy access to his or her doctor’s record of treating similarly afflicted patients. Through gaining such access, the ailing patient may better determine whether the doctor is competent to treat that medical condition. 50
- The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government, industry, or other fields is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation, not competition. 33
- “The Smith Corporation should not be permitted to develop the land that is now part of the Youngtown Wildlife Preserve. This sanctuary is essential to the survival of the 300 bird species that live in our area. Although only a small percentage of the la 63
- Men and women, because of their inherent physical differences, are not equally suited for many tasks 50
- "According to a recent report from our marketing department, during the past year, fewer people attended Super Screen-produced movies than in any other year. And yet the percentage of positive reviews by movie reviewers about specific Super Screen mo 37
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 220, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'individuals'' or 'individual's'?
Suggestion: individuals'; individual's
...y doctors to patients vary based on the individuals health conditions and situation.The dis...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 264, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: The
...viduals health conditions and situation.The disease may be common but the way the d...
^^^
Line 3, column 207, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: If
... varies based on his/her health reports.If the patient is suffering from diabetes ...
^^
Line 3, column 362, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Hence
...g no other disease then the way differs.Hence patients should never be given access t...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 362, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...g no other disease then the way differs.Hence patients should never be given access t...
^^^^^
Line 7, column 243, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: By
...ated successfully and are out of danger.By doing so there will be a positivity gen...
^^
Line 7, column 383, Rule ID: MUCH_COUNTABLE[1]
Message: Use 'many' with countable nouns.
Suggestion: many
...the treatment will be undergone without much difficulties. Finally, we can conclu...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, hence, if, may, moreover, regarding, similarly, so, then, for example, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 19.5258426966 92% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 12.4196629213 129% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 14.8657303371 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.3162921348 35% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 33.0505617978 51% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 58.6224719101 63% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 12.9106741573 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1484.0 2235.4752809 66% => OK
No of words: 296.0 442.535393258 67% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01351351351 5.05705443957 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.55969084622 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66959450909 2.79657885939 95% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 215.323595506 68% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.493243243243 0.4932671777 100% => OK
syllable_count: 455.4 704.065955056 65% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 20.2370786517 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 59.0 23.0359550562 256% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 93.7003735318 60.3974514979 155% => OK
Chars per sentence: 296.8 118.986275619 249% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 59.2 23.4991977007 252% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 18.4 5.21951772744 353% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 7.80617977528 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 10.2758426966 19% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.34509449636 0.243740707755 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.218010185657 0.0831039109588 262% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0606650023172 0.0758088955206 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.218010185657 0.150359130593 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0606650023172 0.0667264976115 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 31.8 14.1392134831 225% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 20.05 48.8420337079 41% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 25.1 12.1743820225 206% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 12.67 12.1639044944 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.87 8.38706741573 118% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 100.480337079 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 27.5 11.8971910112 231% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 25.6 11.2143820225 228% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 26.0 11.7820224719 221% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.