It is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age. Punishment is necessary to help them learn this distinction. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? What sort of punishment should parents and teachers be allowed to use to teach good behaviour to children?
some kind of opinions always trusts that punishment is vital for the growth of kids to identify the correction. I completely agree with this statement.
there are several reasons why I believe that punishment is critical for kids. The main purpose is that it can let the kid know what they should do. Early age of a person is easily influenced by adults, who should make some obvious actions to educate the kids. For instance, there is existing a lot of punishment plans on several primary schools, not only the homework problems but also the management of bad behaviors. they will be punished as long as they get a mistake. this punishment is used to teach the kids what kind of stuff is feasible, as well as restrict their behaviors to be correct. punishment is necessary for kids’ education.
Someone may claim that punishment is a serious problem to damage the growth of kids. I object and I strongly believe that a suitable punishment is a positive influence for kids. A typical example of this trend would be the fact that parents often punish the kids via the gifts, the father may warn their kids that buying a gift would not be allowed if the worse behavior occurs on the kids. it is an effective way as the world of the kids is limited, they just pursue happiness, which is toys and cartoons, so that it is easy to punish a kid. On the other hand, teachers may establish some rules to punish the naughty pupils, such as extend their schooling time as well as do the homework compulsory. this would also be a feasible method to warn young pupils.
In conclusion, I believe that suitable punishment is considered to let the kids conclude the nature of everything.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, well, for instance, in conclusion, kind of, such as, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1384.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 298.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.64429530201 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5818086253 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.530201342282 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 426.6 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.6112580285 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.5 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.625 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.625 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.232725817799 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0854243092637 0.084324248473 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0358505143689 0.0667982634062 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143257400557 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0598705724451 0.056905535591 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 13.0946893788 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 50.2224549098 140% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 11.3001002004 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.63 12.4159519038 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.03 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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