Certain Kind of music promote learning in life. Agree or disagree?
Surely there has been no time in the history where the lives of people have changed more dramatically. A typical day reveals music has been one of the prominent topics in the contemporary discussions. People always used to analyze and explain how music increases the skill and promote learning in life. I am totally agreed with this statement and I will explain regarding this in the next paragraphs.
To begin with, music is a beautiful art which entertain us whenever it is the time of happiness or its painful. Sometimes music feel our inner feelings and it get match with our situation and feel us good. Music increase our concentration to do proper work. We learn new and better things during listening the music. It increases the learning ability and help us to explore more new things. Old music was very meaningful and teach us main role of life. Music make us aware of obsolete music. Now days there are competitions for music and new artist are build daily.
Probing further, for some people music is a daily need and they earn money from their music. Poor people have no good facilities like tutors. so, they listen to music on their phones and practice it, to be a good artist.
To conclude, I would say music is our best companion. It never feels us boring and always entertain us.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'gets'?
Suggestion: gets
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: So
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, regarding, so, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 8.36945812808 155% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 5.94088669951 34% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 20.9802955665 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 24.0 31.9359605911 75% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.75862068966 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1071.0 1207.87684729 89% => OK
No of words: 229.0 242.827586207 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.6768558952 5.00649968141 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89008302616 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47488481015 2.71678728327 91% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 139.433497537 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.61135371179 0.580463131201 105% => OK
syllable_count: 340.2 379.143842365 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 12.6551724138 134% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.5024630542 63% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 22.5153542382 50.4703680194 45% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 63.0 104.977214359 60% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.4705882353 20.9669160288 64% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.88235294118 7.25397266985 26% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 6.9802955665 201% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.229242854902 0.242375264174 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0772020976564 0.0925447433944 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0633610051924 0.071462118173 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123497604397 0.151781067708 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0591173030475 0.0609392437508 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.3 12.6369458128 58% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 53.1260098522 126% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.9458128079 66% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.27 11.5310837438 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.59 8.32886699507 91% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 55.0591133005 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.3980295567 69% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.5123152709 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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