Some people believe that confidence wins bigger games that knowledge alone cannot. Also, that accumulating knowledge makes no sense until one has the confidence to put it to use. Is it true that knowledge will help one win a struggle only if it is put into practice with full confidence, or is it confidence without knowledge that is null and void?
It has always been a moot factor to concede the fact that knowledge is imperative and indispensable as confidence. Let's
delve further into the discussion to know in depth.
Have we even seen our school teachers earning more that their students? Did we ever notice that why teachers are not
political leaders, industrialist or beurecrats? Albeit they have all the knowledge to become successful in life but it's
not true. They teach us the law of nature, rule of society and ethics of economy. That is because knowledge alone never
acsend to summit in real life. Many often we have observed that the school or college or university dean and professor are
less knowledgable but have more confidenc to handle the student. This quality of confidence makes them leaders and chairman
of universities. A society also elect that person who have knowledge provided he/she has the confidence to prove his onus
to the society with indispensable acts.
Ancient history also support to the fact that priests have all the knowledge but the ruler was the one having all these
knowledgde but edge by heap of confidence. The army was motivated and ruled by a leader who has the confidence to win the
battle not only the battle knacs help always.
Majority of the Government is supported and ruled by the bueracrats and industrialists, are these just knowledge that help
them ascend their path or the confident and captive hold on the market. Apparantely, knowledge is a key to all these
calculations and one need confidence to drive the knowledge in correct direction to reap the success is main prospect.
Not only the knack to swing a sword wins the battle but the thrust of confidence definetely does.
As per the above arguments and evidences, I would concede and advocate the fact that knowledge is base but confidence added
to the knowledge is par above all to win bigger game.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
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Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 6.10837438424 33% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 8.36945812808 251% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 11.0 5.94088669951 185% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 20.9802955665 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 31.9359605911 110% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 5.75862068966 174% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1612.0 1207.87684729 133% => OK
No of words: 319.0 242.827586207 131% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05329153605 5.00649968141 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22617688928 3.92707691288 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74072637408 2.71678728327 101% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 139.433497537 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.53605015674 0.580463131201 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 500.4 379.143842365 132% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
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Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
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Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.2192248208 50.4703680194 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.75 104.977214359 96% => OK
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Language errors: 25.0 5.33497536946 469% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 2.91625615764 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
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Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0683967354437 0.071462118173 96% => OK
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Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 12.6369458128 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 53.1260098522 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.9458128079 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.01 11.5310837438 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.65 8.32886699507 92% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 55.0591133005 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.94827586207 60% => OK
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What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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