TPO-48: Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Because modern life is very complex, it is essential for young people to have the ability to plan and organize. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
due to the advanced technology and unprecedented speed of change of this society, people are having trouble with prediction of the future. some of the people insist that young people do not have to plan or deeply thinking about the future while the others says early plan of the future decides future success. As far as I concern, I believe it is necessary to set the plan about the future since young age with the following statement.
To begin with, in order to achieve the great success and accomplish the small goal in the future, youth required to have ability to well organize about their goal. The more knowledge and information are informed, it is becoming more difficult to predict the future. For instance, in the past, people are amazed with the advent of the screen which only show black and white image without having sound. However, with the screen, not only people can listen and watch they are also able to touch and feel through the special effects as VR or 4D technology. In this well-developed society, it is not even possible to forecast the next year. So, the sufficient research and elaborate design of the plan need to be acted for the high percent of the success in the near future. that is why the job, futurist which predict the future and set the solution about it, has been highlighted. For the young people whom need to work as a main social member, skill to plan and organize the event is important in this sophisticated society.
Furthermore, young people are living in what the media or the others says. In the young age, everything that happen in the future is new. Moreover, as the frequent intervention of parents and article about the decision about, they want to make increase as times go, young people are more hard to organize themselves. In the Netherlands, young people who over adult age, do not willing to live alone. The estimated number of young age people under 24 years living with their parents are around 70 percent total. due to the parents are constantly solving all the troubles that young people engaged, the skill that organize difficulty and solve the future treat are lowering. For instance, when I was in college, the first thing that I have to do is organize the schedule and attend the some of the school event that will help for my successful school life. since the young age, due to the busy schedule of parents, I was given situation that all the task whether it has been simple or sophisticated to solve alone. I unintentionally learned how to manage myself. After few months, among the number of 5,000 students, only 200 students have attended school event at least one time. Rest of them are even unrecognized the existence of school event. The ability whether set the future or didn't decide the success of the young people’s success.
For the conclusion. since the development of technology and social norm, society has rapidly been changing, and the young people’s ability of organizing the future has been decreasing. In order to outstand than others,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, well, while, at least, for instance, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 15.1003584229 159% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 13.8261648746 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 43.0788530466 70% => OK
Preposition: 77.0 52.1666666667 148% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2521.0 1977.66487455 127% => OK
No of words: 524.0 407.700716846 129% => OK
Chars per words: 4.81106870229 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.7844588288 4.48103885553 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54459311307 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 246.0 212.727598566 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.469465648855 0.524837075471 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 787.5 618.680645161 127% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 12.0 4.94265232975 243% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.6003584229 126% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.6602613599 48.9658058833 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.9615384615 100.406767564 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1538461538 20.6045352989 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.96153846154 5.45110844103 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.5376344086 181% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.199865933356 0.236089414692 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0567489389891 0.076458572812 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0422669547243 0.0737576698707 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13252382573 0.150856017488 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0385387281774 0.0645574589148 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 11.7677419355 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 10.9000537634 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.64 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 86.8835125448 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.002688172 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.