Some people think that advertising on TV is useful for viewers, while others disagree. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
Adverts are indispensable part of every sales and marketing campaign. A sector of the society believes that airing of commercials on idiot box are beneficial whereas others suggest they are useless. In my opinion, it is like tow sides of the same coin in which it provides information on products and delivers social messages, while it certainly interrupts viewing experience when they are aired.
To begin with, there is no denying on the fact that commercials on television set delivers good information on currents trends. This helps in promoting a new product or scheme, which can be leveraged by consumers, without advertisement it becomes difficult for end user to be aware about them. Not only it assists in creating demand of a product, but advertisements help in delivering social messages to create awareness for a cause among masses. Repetitive telecast of adverts gives an ever-lasting impression on human mind. For instance, The Swatch Bharat Abhiyan (Clean India Drive) started by our Prime Minister Narendra Mode, is played regularly on Television channels, featuring a famous celebrity Amitabh Bachchan for catching attention of whole nation.
On the other hand, advertisements aired while watching TV, sometimes, ruins our viewing experience. Break’s within a serial, movie or news deviates our attention and it unnecessary adds suspense with a tag “What happens next” is very annoying. Additionally, advertisement becomes dull and boring once they have been watched as it loses the suspense quotient. For instance, an advertisement clip of a leading Shampoo brand loses its charm when it is played repeatedly as viewers knows what is coming next.
To my mind, they are good source of information on new products, beneficiary schemes or spreading social message as they are viewed on nationwide. To summarize, although commercials provide important information, but it also impedes our viewing experience.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 686, Rule ID: FAMOUS_CELEBRITY[1]
Message: Use simply 'celebrity'.
Suggestion: celebrity
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, whereas, while, for instance, in my opinion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1653.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 301.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.49169435216 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06703363045 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.651162790698 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 515.7 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.4793467224 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.071428571 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.85714285714 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.130716552712 0.244688304435 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0415550247307 0.084324248473 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0436899114976 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.067499427775 0.151304729494 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0397589205968 0.056905535591 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.56 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.29 8.58950901804 120% => OK
difficult_words: 107.0 78.4519038076 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.