Government should reduce their investment in arts, music and painting. Agree or disagree？
Yes I agree with this statement because when the government inverstment in arts,music and painting. Some people are interesting in arts but they have no money to buy the expensive paints for painting when the government give the instruments for people's when the people do their paintings. Some people are interesting in music but they cannot buy the music instruments. Because music instruments are very expensive. Music instruments like tabla,gitter,mike,harmonium,sitter .With the help of these instruments people learn the music. Government give these instruments for the people's. Some children's are interesting in painting but they belong poor families they cannot see their talent to the people's. Government give the painting material to the students then they can see the talent. Government organize the painting, singing competition every year and give the prize to the students who stand in first,second and third position. Government also give funds to poor families. Because some poor families children are very talented they cannot show their talent because of money problem. Some government cannot invest their money they cannot give the money for the peoples.They can reduce the money in his pocket. Central government give the funds for the poor families but the government invest their money.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , music
... when the government inverstment in arts,music and painting. Some people are interesti...
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Line 1, column 117, Rule ID: BE_INTEREST_IN[1]
Message: Did you mean 'interested'?
Suggestion: interested
...rts,music and painting. Some people are interesting in arts but they have no money to buy t...
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Line 1, column 306, Rule ID: BE_INTEREST_IN[1]
Message: Did you mean 'interested'?
Suggestion: interested
...ple do their paintings. Some people are interesting in music but they cannot buy the music ...
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Line 1, column 370, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... they cannot buy the music instruments. Because music instruments are very expensive. M...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , gitter
... expensive. Music instruments like tabla,gitter,mike,harmonium,sitter .With the help of...
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Line 1, column 456, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , harmonium
...Music instruments like tabla,gitter,mike,harmonium,sitter .With the help of these instrume...
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Line 1, column 473, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
... like tabla,gitter,mike,harmonium,sitter .With the help of these instruments peopl...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: With
...ike tabla,gitter,mike,harmonium,sitter .With the help of these instruments people le...
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Line 1, column 545, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'gives'.
Suggestion: gives
...ents people learn the music. Government give these instruments for the peoples. Some...
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Message: The proper name in singular (Government) must be used with a third-person verb: 'gives'.
Suggestion: gives
...ents people learn the music. Government give these instruments for the peoples. Some...
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Line 1, column 604, Rule ID: BE_INTEREST_IN[1]
Message: Did you mean 'interested'?
Suggestion: interested
...nts for the peoples. Some childrens are interesting in painting but they belong poor famili...
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Message: Consider using third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'gives'.
Suggestion: gives
...their talent to the peoples. Government give the painting material to the students t...
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Message: The proper name in singular (Government) must be used with a third-person verb: 'gives'.
Suggestion: gives
...their talent to the peoples. Government give the painting material to the students t...
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Line 1, column 798, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'organizes'.
Suggestion: organizes
...hen they can see the talent. Government organize the painting, singing competition every...
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Message: The proper name in singular (Government) must be used with a third-person verb: 'organizes'.
Suggestion: organizes
...hen they can see the talent. Government organize the painting, singing competition every...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , second
...prize to the students who stand in first,second and third position. Government also giv...
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...and in first,second and third position. Government also give funds to poor families. Becau...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: They
...y cannot give the money for the peoples.They can reduce the money in his pocket. Cen...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, second, so, then, third
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 10.5418719212 47% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 20.9802955665 86% => OK
Preposition: 16.0 31.9359605911 50% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 13.0 5.75862068966 226% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1106.0 1207.87684729 92% => OK
No of words: 202.0 242.827586207 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.47524752475 5.00649968141 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76996954942 3.92707691288 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.36285492633 2.71678728327 124% => OK
Unique words: 88.0 139.433497537 63% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.435643564356 0.580463131201 75% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 331.2 379.143842365 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.6157635468 22% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.65517241379 27% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.5024630542 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.6902205772 50.4703680194 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.0769230769 104.977214359 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5384615385 20.9669160288 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.15384615385 7.25397266985 43% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.12807881773 24% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 18.0 5.33497536946 337% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.233573997997 0.242375264174 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0975557352782 0.0925447433944 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0593240930045 0.071462118173 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.233573997997 0.151781067708 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0609392437508 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 12.6369458128 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 53.1260098522 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.9458128079 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.21 11.5310837438 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.27 8.32886699507 87% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 55.0591133005 67% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.94827586207 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.3980295567 77% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.5123152709 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.