These days, in many countries, fewer and fewer people want to become teachers, particularly in secondary schools. What are the reasons for this, and how could the problem be solved?
children's education plays a crucial role in the future. Nonetheless, we seem to forget who is responsible for educating them. Otherwise, why do we let those responsible for preparing our children for the future, the teachers, feel neglected and become unmotivated? The result of this negligence has been fewer people are interested in pursuing teaching school as a career. this essay will discuss the reasons behind this phenomenon and propose solutions for this issue.
There is no doubt that both the government and the schools have let down the teachers. The government should pay more attention to the living conditions of the teachers, which is deeply dependent upon the pay and the benefits that they receive. they get very little pay for a challenging and important job they do. For instance, teachers in some countries earn less than one-tenth of what a doctor or a lawyer makes, while the teachers are the ones who help them to reach that position. Also, the schools' environment does not make the situation better for the teachers. For example, when students go to high school, they are going through puberty, which makes them moody and hard to control. So it is especially hard for the teachers teaching in secondary schools to deal with their students' problems properly.
Nevertheless, while teachers are facing these problems daily, some measures can be taken to ease the situation for them. Firstly, the government should take actions which can help teachers in their life in order to make their lives less stressful. this help can include raising their salary, giving them more benefits, or some incentives of this sort. Secondly, the school's environment should be more cooperative, where the school's staff help each other in their tasks.
To summarize, there are problems that teachers encounter in both their personal and professional life that can be solved by the help of the government or the schools themselves. it is essential to solving these problems because our children's future depends on it.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, nevertheless, nonetheless, second, secondly, so, while, for example, for instance, no doubt
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1729.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 331.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.22356495468 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26537283232 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66931722065 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.546827794562 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 497.7 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.6674459022 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.0555555556 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3888888889 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.199128281425 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0631833938516 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0449454162087 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123124777664 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0430546250269 0.056905535591 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.15 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.