many university students live with their families, while other live away from home because their universities are in different place
Nowadays, it is true many university students live with their families, while other live away from home because their universities are in different place. I completely agree that it gives more positive than negative for same reasons.
In the one hand, the advantage of this issue is students who live with his parents will be more easily monitored the parental learning of the child where as students area staying away from his parents because they learn in other areas will be more independent and more coast of memansage money. it is because, for students who live with their parents will meet their families more often at home while students who live far from their parents will think more about the deductions they will spend. For example, students who live with their parents will more often tell how things are in the university while children who live far from their parents will save more often so that the money given by their parents is enough and does not burden their parents. As a result, students who live for, their parents will be calmer because he is in the family while students who are far from theirs parents will be more independent and more efficient.
And on one side again, the disadvantage of this issue is student who live with their parents tend to be more spoiled while students who are far from their parents live with their parents are always in theirs in theirs comfort zone while students who are far form their parents are less at tentage than their parents who re far from them. Like an example, students who live with their parents willy get more facilities from their parents while students who are far from their parents communicate less with their parents. And as result, students who live with his parents will tend to be more spoiled while the students who are away from his parents will tend to be more not directed.
In my opinion, we recommend students who are living with their parents do not be too in pampering with all the amenities while the students who far away the parents have to more communicate with his parents to live his life more.
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- Some experts believe that it is better for children to begin learning a foreing language at primary school rather than secondary school 67
- Some educationalists argue that non-exam, art-based subjects, such as music, drama, art and craft, should be compulsory in the secondary-school curriculum. They believe that activities such as these can improve overall academic performance. To what extent 11
- some people believe that a great difference in age between parents and children is more beneficial 56
- many university students live with their families, while other live away from home because their universities are in different place 61
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, while, for example, as a result, in my opinion, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 13.1623246493 182% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 20.0 7.30460921844 274% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 43.0 24.0651302605 179% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1737.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 367.0 315.596192385 116% => OK
Chars per words: 4.73297002725 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37689890912 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.19941480318 2.80592935109 78% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 176.041082164 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.359673024523 0.561755894193 64% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 537.3 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 36.0 20.2975951904 177% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 70.7438336535 49.4020404114 143% => OK
Chars per sentence: 173.7 106.682146367 163% => OK
Words per sentence: 36.7 20.7667163134 177% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.6 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.440183076246 0.244688304435 180% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.290976310962 0.084324248473 345% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.232742918106 0.0667982634062 348% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.394695477795 0.151304729494 261% => Maybe some contents are duplicated.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.185242652188 0.056905535591 326% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.2 13.0946893788 147% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.4 50.2224549098 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 11.3001002004 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.75 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.27 8.58950901804 85% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 78.4519038076 55% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.4 10.1190380762 162% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.