All to often, companies hire outside consultants to suggests ways for the company to operate more efficiently. If companies were to spend more time listening to their own employees, such consultants would be unnecessary
the speaker here thinks that if companies spend more time listening to their own employees, the consultant from outside to suggests ways for companies to operate more efficiently would be unnecessary. i agree with the speaker above. as the employees of the company knows each and every details of the company ad about their weakness and strength, it would be easier for them to formulate the ideas necessary for the development and growth of the company.
some might argue that hiring the consultants from outside can help in generating new ideas and their new skills can help the company to work more efficiently; However if company have well trained staffs who can think critically, they an do meticulous analysis of each and every details of the work which results in a better way. not only it saves the money of the company by this means, but also it saves time and labor. For an example, XYZ company located in Nepal do not hire any consultants form outside for any kind of suggestion. they conduct employees meeting every week and listen to every of their ideas and views carefully, which have helped them to rise in such a challenging market. On the other hand hiring the consultants from outside increases the risk of loss of privacy if the company as the people from outside cannot be trusted as of own.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, well, kind of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 19.5258426966 15% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 12.4196629213 56% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 14.8657303371 61% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.3162921348 44% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 33.0505617978 45% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 58.6224719101 61% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 12.9106741573 15% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1086.0 2235.4752809 49% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 229.0 442.535393258 52% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.7423580786 5.05705443957 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89008302616 4.55969084622 85% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50868706749 2.79657885939 90% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 215.323595506 58% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.541484716157 0.4932671777 110% => OK
syllable_count: 342.0 704.065955056 49% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 20.2370786517 40% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 23.0359550562 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 84.4778077367 60.3974514979 140% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.75 118.986275619 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.625 23.4991977007 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5 5.21951772744 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.97078651685 40% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 9.0 7.80617977528 115% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 10.2758426966 49% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.50273834091 0.243740707755 206% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.207543031102 0.0831039109588 250% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.184124495905 0.0758088955206 243% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.429641076409 0.150359130593 286% => Maybe some contents are duplicated.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0929314858802 0.0667264976115 139% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 14.1392134831 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 48.8420337079 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 12.1743820225 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.8 12.1639044944 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.85 8.38706741573 94% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 100.480337079 41% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.8971910112 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 11.2143820225 118% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.7820224719 119% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 33.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 6
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