Nature's Way, a chain of stores selling health food and other health-related products, is opening its next franchise in the town of Plainsville. The store should prove to be very successful: Nature's Way franchises tend to be most profitable in areas where residents lead healthy lives, and clearly Plainsville is such an area. Plainsville merchants report that sales of running shoes and exercise clothing are at all-time highs. The local health club has more members than ever, and the weight training and aerobics classes are always full. Finally, Plainsville's schoolchildren represent a new generation of potential customers: these schoolchildren are required to participate in a fitness-for-life program, which emphasizes the benefits of regular exercise at an early age.
Write a response in which you examine the stated and/or unstated assumptions of the argument. Be sure to explain how the argument depends on these assumptions and what the implications are for the argument if the assumptions prove unwarranted
It is stated that in the town of Plainsville a new chain store is opening its next franchise and they are hoping it, as a successful one comparing with the other franchises in other areas .Along with the citizens of Plainsville, the school going children are thought to be the potential customers of this store. However, before evaluating the argument some assumptions need to be discussed in order to decide whether the argument is reasonable or not .
Firstly ,it is assumed that Plainsville residents tend to live a healthy lifestyle ,so Nature”s Way will be profitable here just like other areas.People of Plainsville buy lots of running shoes and clothing all the time at a high rate .But that does not mean they will be interested in healthy food and healthy eating .Perhaps it might happen they actually love to eat unhealthy food ,so they do exercise to shed the extra pounds.Or it might happen that they actually just buy these equipments ,but due to laziness they do not go to gym.And if any of these become true ,then the author”s argument will surely wear out .
Secondly,as the weight training and aerobics classes are always full ,it has been assumed that all the citizens of Plainsville is very health conscious. But it might happen that only a couple of people are health conscious. Or it also might happen that there are paucity of aerobics classes and gyms in the town so people try to utilize from the few opportunities .So these classes have been always crowded. It does not indicate that they will love healthy food or healthy products the way they love to do exercises .If any of these become true ,then author”s argument will definitely be undermined .
Thirdly,it is assumed that the school going children of Plainsville is the most prospectful customers of the chain shop, as they have to attend a fitness program where importance of regular exercise has always been emphasized .Just because the children have to attend a program and they are aware about exercise does not make them to be interested in healthy eating .Perhaps it might happen that they love fast foods or junk foods but they also do exercise .Or it also might happen not all the children join in that program. Or even if they join they do not enjoy that much .if all of these become true ,the argument of the author will surely be weakened .
In conclusion ,the argument where it stands now ,is considerably flawed due to numerous assumptions and proper justifications .If the author can give some proper evidence and explain those assumptions, ,Nature”s Way –the chain shop might expect a handsome benefit in near future from the Plainsville residence .
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Essay evaluation report
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 4.0 out of 6
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 12 15
No. of Words: 458 350
No. of Characters: 2139 1500
No. of Different Words: 197 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.626 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.67 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.512 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 146 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 106 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 70 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 40 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 38.167 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 25.495 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.833 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.363 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.629 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.08 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, then, third, thirdly, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 19.6327345309 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 12.9520958084 116% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 11.1786427146 179% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 13.6137724551 103% => OK
Pronoun: 48.0 28.8173652695 167% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 55.5748502994 86% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 16.3942115768 55% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2234.0 2260.96107784 99% => OK
No of words: 453.0 441.139720559 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.93156732892 5.12650576532 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.61343653406 4.56307096286 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69965164957 2.78398813304 97% => OK
Unique words: 207.0 204.123752495 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.456953642384 0.468620217663 98% => OK
syllable_count: 684.9 705.55239521 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59920159681 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.96107784431 101% => OK
Article: 3.0 8.76447105788 34% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 2.70958083832 258% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 8.0 1.67365269461 478% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.22255489022 71% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 19.7664670659 51% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 45.0 22.8473053892 197% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 173.529133001 57.8364921388 300% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 223.4 119.503703932 187% => OK
Words per sentence: 45.3 23.324526521 194% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.7 5.70786347227 187% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.15768463074 97% => OK
Language errors: 44.0 5.25449101796 837% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.20758483034 85% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 6.88822355289 15% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.67664670659 43% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.182678088308 0.218282227539 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0786944727341 0.0743258471296 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0695006650426 0.0701772020484 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113215027588 0.128457276422 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0699919103557 0.0628817314937 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 24.4 14.3799401198 170% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.26 48.3550499002 71% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.1628742515 123% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 19.7 12.197005988 162% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.2 12.5979740519 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.48 8.32208582834 102% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 98.500998004 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 12.3882235529 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 20.0 11.1389221557 180% => OK
text_standard: 20.0 11.9071856287 168% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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