Despite large numbers of gyms, a sedentary lifestyle is gaining is gaining popularity in contemporary world .
What problems are associated with it ?
What solutions can you suggest ?
Regardless the recent enormously increasing in the number of health clubs, many people tend to be physically inactive. This essay will examine some problems resulting in this and some possible solutions will be given.
The two problems of being lazy or couch potato are : firstly, being obese . Secondly, decreasing the productivity of several people. As a matter of fact, when people do not workout regularly, their body will not be able to burn most of the data. So, they can easily gain weight. Besides the personal inconvenience, overweighing has been linked to a number of illnesses such as, heart diseases, stroke and high blood pressure. Because of this, the productivity of people might be effected.
One possible solutions for this problem is promoting awareness among the public. Surely, making awareness campaigns to encourage people beating the sedentary lifestyle and spend more time and effort to avoid many danger effects of obesity. For instance, Finland used to have one of the highest mortality rat from heart disease, but it has managed to reverse the trend. Also, the government has to intervene to put an end to this problem. However the authorities can not drag people out of PlayStation, on the other hand it can give some firm suggestions.
In conclusion, the problem of becoming physically inactive not only has a negative impact on the individual, but also on the entire society. Although, there is a correlation between obesity a many diseases, this problem can be avoidable by enhancing the public awareness of the grave consequences of gaining weight.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, as to, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as a matter of fact, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1325.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 257.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15564202335 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8296390903 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.630350194553 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 427.5 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.9974443628 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.3333333333 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1333333333 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.2666666667 7.06120827912 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.126622607728 0.244688304435 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0425074210838 0.084324248473 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0400788474907 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.078133549272 0.151304729494 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0185924902174 0.056905535591 33% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.35 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.96 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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