Advertisement are becoming more and more common in our everyday life. Do you think it is a positive or negative development?
In the modern world, people can approach to the commercial an advertisement on television or on the radio, even on the street. In my opinion, I believe that it could has both side benefits and drawbacks in the advertisements.
On the one hand, it is unquestioned that the rise of advertising can bring numerous benefits. With a company, advertisement is very important for their market strategy which propagate the messages involved in products or services to reach potential customers, increasing sale in their businesses. Furthermore, customers can update information about new products to have more choice and decide which is good quality. another advantage of advertising is that it provides occupations for designers, artists and playwriters who design logo, draw banners or prepare content for advertisements of company. they also can marketing for themselves through their resume on the job website such as Linkedin.
On the other hand, this trend also give many drawbacks for both customers and company. For example, children nowadays can easily to see advertising for adults on the social media, which has content not fit for them. they curious and might be lead them to do wrong actions for their misunderstanding, because they are too young deal with these advertisements. In addition, another disadvantage of advertising is that it is too expensive for launched products or services. this is the reason why the more advertising expense is, the higher the product's price is. Consequently, the advertised products can cost more than they should because the price includes the cost of advertisements.
In conclusion, based on all the above explanations, the increase of advertising will have both benefits and drawbacks to individuals.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, furthermore, so, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1491.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.42181818182 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.18474878026 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.574545454545 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 456.3 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.0383203605 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.5 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6428571429 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.5 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.110213464207 0.244688304435 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0424362445474 0.084324248473 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0350122371532 0.0667982634062 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.061342663843 0.151304729494 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0304912185625 0.056905535591 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.66 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.