Technology, while apparently aimed to simplify our lives, only makes our lives more complicated.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
There is no doubt in the fact that scientific inventions have revolutionised the human life.Infact, there is no single aspect left uninfluenced by the technological advancements.While some believe these inventions have made human lives much easier than previous times,others advocate the idea that our lives have become more intricate than they used to be.I am an ardent supporter of the former notion due to the fact that the advances in science and technology have made lives more convenient by saving time and effort which was earlier spent in doing tasks manually leading to improved standard of living.
To begin with,right from waking up early morning and heading to office in cars, buses or other means of transportation have cut out the time that was wasted in daily commute when man had no option of travelling other than by foot.Not only this,once he reaches his workplace he cannot imagine his work without laptops and computers which help solve prodigious calculations and analysis just in a blink of an eye.Data collection, report making and all statistical work has now become so easy to do.Take an example of phone and other sources of communication through which family members living across different geographical locations can remain connected through video calls.All in all,we could not think of life without these gadgets now which has made everything possible just with a click of button now.
Moving further,the technological breakthroughs have not only made our life more convenient but added quality to our life.The standard of living has improved than it used to be in the past.It has help us overcome all the unnecessary struggle involved in doing trivial jobs ,thereby, saving all unnecessary manual efforts and time which could be better utilized in doing more complex tasks.So, the idea of making life more complex is ,in actual fact, totally vague.Instead of making life chaotic, it helps us to do things in an organised way.
However,at certain times,one may feel technology has affected our relationships.Take for an instance, "Work from home" strategy. No doubt, it provides an opportunity to an individual to work from the comfort of their home,but has eaten away the essence of spending some quality time with family members as people have become so engrossed in their work that it becomes difficult to manage personal and professional life.People have become more stressed than ever due to continuous workload from their offices.However,this sole drawback cannot overshadow the enormous benefits that the technology has offered to mankind ranging from the laptop I am currently typing on to the vaccines and medications available for serious ailments.
In conclusion,the current era is of tech-savvy people.Thus we cannot abstain from using it and cannot understate its value in building up a much simpler life than our ancestors used to lead.
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but, however, if, may, so, thus, while, in conclusion, no doubt, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 19.5258426966 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.4196629213 64% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 14.8657303371 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.3162921348 106% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 33.0505617978 109% => OK
Preposition: 69.0 58.6224719101 118% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 12.9106741573 46% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2433.0 2235.4752809 109% => OK
No of words: 461.0 442.535393258 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.27765726681 5.05705443957 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.63367139033 4.55969084622 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01506109394 2.79657885939 108% => OK
Unique words: 259.0 215.323595506 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.561822125813 0.4932671777 114% => OK
syllable_count: 767.7 704.065955056 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 20.2370786517 30% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 76.0 23.0359550562 330% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 238.417991957 60.3974514979 395% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 405.5 118.986275619 341% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 76.8333333333 23.4991977007 327% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 13.0 5.21951772744 249% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 30.0 7.80617977528 384% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 10.2758426966 39% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.14361096525 0.243740707755 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0744137132683 0.0831039109588 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0366602368195 0.0758088955206 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0803087408224 0.150359130593 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0358321874805 0.0667264976115 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 41.9 14.1392134831 296% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -14.12 48.8420337079 -29% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 15.9 7.92365168539 201% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 34.1 12.1743820225 280% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 14.53 12.1639044944 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 12.03 8.38706741573 143% => OK
difficult_words: 135.0 100.480337079 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 28.5 11.8971910112 240% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 32.4 11.2143820225 289% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 29.0 11.7820224719 246% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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