Some people say that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sports facilities. Others, however, say that this would have little effect on public health and that other measures are required. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
It is often argued that the most effective way of improving public health is by building more sports structures while some advocate that this would not have a significant impact on public health and other important actions are needed. This essay sides with the latter statement as lack of education have led to poor dietary habits which result in many diseases.
On one hand, the primary reason behind the viewpoint to increase the number of recreational centers is lack of venues and facilities for sports or leisure activities in crowded cities. As local governments in major cities spent massive budgets on construction of residential apartments and commercial centers, places for recreational activities are almost neglected. For example, in 2018, a survey conducted by Times of India, in Mumbai, showed that 45% of the people simply do not exercise due to lack of sports facilities. However, this essay argues that making places for doing physical activities or playing sports will not improve overall public health and education related to eating habits is equally more important.
On the other hand, others believe that apart from creating more sports facilities, public campaigns about consuming healthy food regularly could impact public health. Most common public health disorders such as Obesity, Diabetes and Hypertension are due to wrong eating habits, which are eating junk food and poor meal timings. For instance, a report by Mumbai general hospital revealed that 45% of their patient’s health improved only with modification of food habits, this resulted in significant reduction of the number of pills consumed by the patients. For this reason, this essay believes that education on dietary habits is more important.
In conclusion, although some people believe that increasing the sports centers would improve public health, this essay finds that education on healthy diet is the most effective way to upgrade health of people.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, while, apart from, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1653.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 307.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.38436482085 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62086884768 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.537459283388 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 497.7 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 41.6466839135 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 150.272727273 106.682146367 141% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.9090909091 20.7667163134 134% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.45454545455 7.06120827912 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.318977584893 0.244688304435 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.127345403176 0.084324248473 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.113888688845 0.0667982634062 170% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.23231378548 0.151304729494 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0799764631884 0.056905535591 141% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.9 13.0946893788 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.22 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.5 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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