A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college.
As the assertion says that all the students from kindergarten to higher secondary study must follow the same national curriculum, till the time they enter college. This statement is given by the nation here is very generalized. I disagree with the statement because when we dig deep into its study, we will be able to picture the flaws in this statement.
Generally, in a nation there are multicultural students who have very different thinking perspective. Some children may dream of becoming a sports player, novelist, scientist, artist, IAS. So, the problem here is if a nation starts to give this national curriculum as the syllabus of student's study till the child goes for graduation, then all of them are getting a common knowledge. Due to this maybe the national curriculum is focused in only one direction, for example focused only making the students scientist. Some may think it is good thing, but then the question arises; What about other fields of development like sports etc.
Due to this when a child's dream is to represent his/her country in national level sports, this becomes a huge problem. As he/she must go through that common curriculum that is followed in whole nation. Thereby, not getting adequate time for practice in sports and developing love for the game. This national curriculum may also, not even contain some of the essentials, like if they want the syllabus to be totally focused on advanced electronics or coding etc. Then from the start of one's schooling, the kid will only study this, as this is mandatory. Many debilitating effects can take place over this. Students get stressed out and feel left out. They become sad and gloomy, as obviously parental pressure will be there on the child to study properly and get good grades, as if he/she does not get grades high enough they will not pass the test and no other alternative is also present so that the child might pursue some other course. Stress is a very bad thing when it occurs at such an early life of a child. This may limit the mental ability to think properly in the later stages of his/her life.
Another problem is that if a common curriculum is presented then when he/she will be choosing what to study for graduation may feel very difficult on what to choose. Because if at the initial stages in primary or secondary school a child gains a predilection towards some profession which he/she wants to become then they start to study or grasp knowledge on what the basic things required to maybe become an astronaut one day or some other profession like , writer etc. So, if a common curriculum is followed then the students will be confused and will follow the majority of students on what to study for graduation. Due to this after graduation majority of the students passed out that year will only become a professional in a single course and ultimately lagging behind in other departments, which may cause a huge loss for countries economy and there is no growth in other departments like sports, writers, entrepreneurs etc.
Hence diversification of study before graduation is a very important factor, as overall growth of students should be of primary concern. In addition to this the other important factor is that multi directional growth of the nation can be achieved by diversification of curriculum for students, which makes the country economically and financially stable at all fronts and leads to growth and prosperity.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 356, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...to picture the flaws in this statement. Generally, in a nation there are multicu...
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Line 3, column 141, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'sports'' or 'sport's'?
Suggestion: sports'; sport's
.... Some children may dream of becoming a sports player, novelist, scientist, artist, IA...
^^^^^^
Line 3, column 365, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[4]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'common knowledge'.
Suggestion: common knowledge
...raduation, then all of them are getting a common knowledge. Due to this maybe the national curricu...
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Line 3, column 497, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'students'' or 'student's'?
Suggestion: students'; student's
...on, for example focused only making the students scientist. Some may think it is good th...
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Line 3, column 635, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...r fields of development like sports etc. Due to this when a childs dream is to re...
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Line 5, column 120, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...el sports, this becomes a huge problem. As he/she must go through that common curr...
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Line 5, column 347, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...l curriculum may also, not even contain some of the essentials, like if they want the sylla...
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Line 5, column 486, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...s or coding etc. Then from the start of ones schooling, the kid will only study this...
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Line 7, column 458, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ut one day or some other profession like , writer etc. So, if a common curriculum ...
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Line 7, column 933, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...like sports, writers, entrepreneurs etc. Hence diversification of study before g...
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Line 9, column 2, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...ports, writers, entrepreneurs etc. Hence diversification of study before graduat...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, may, second, so, then, for example, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 19.5258426966 128% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 20.0 12.4196629213 161% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 14.8657303371 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.3162921348 133% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 33.0505617978 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 73.0 58.6224719101 125% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 12.9106741573 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2862.0 2235.4752809 128% => OK
No of words: 583.0 442.535393258 132% => OK
Chars per words: 4.90909090909 5.05705443957 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.91379618374 4.55969084622 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69087221934 2.79657885939 96% => OK
Unique words: 269.0 215.323595506 125% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.46140651801 0.4932671777 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 894.6 704.065955056 127% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 9.0 3.10617977528 290% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.2370786517 119% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 23.0359550562 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 77.184258254 60.3974514979 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.25 118.986275619 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.2916666667 23.4991977007 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.875 5.21951772744 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 7.80617977528 141% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.2758426966 117% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 5.13820224719 136% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.261236136879 0.243740707755 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0813827275638 0.0831039109588 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0852791587612 0.0758088955206 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.17106814216 0.150359130593 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0622677926334 0.0667264976115 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 14.1392134831 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 48.8420337079 114% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 12.1743820225 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 12.1639044944 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.91 8.38706741573 94% => OK
difficult_words: 114.0 100.480337079 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.8971910112 71% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 11.2143820225 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 356, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...to picture the flaws in this statement. Generally, in a nation there are multicu...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 141, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'sports'' or 'sport's'?
Suggestion: sports'; sport's
.... Some children may dream of becoming a sports player, novelist, scientist, artist, IA...
^^^^^^
Line 3, column 365, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[4]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'common knowledge'.
Suggestion: common knowledge
...raduation, then all of them are getting a common knowledge. Due to this maybe the national curricu...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 497, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'students'' or 'student's'?
Suggestion: students'; student's
...on, for example focused only making the students scientist. Some may think it is good th...
^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 635, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...r fields of development like sports etc. Due to this when a childs dream is to re...
^^^^^^
Line 5, column 120, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...el sports, this becomes a huge problem. As he/she must go through that common curr...
^^
Line 5, column 347, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...l curriculum may also, not even contain some of the essentials, like if they want the sylla...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 486, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...s or coding etc. Then from the start of ones schooling, the kid will only study this...
^^^^
Line 7, column 458, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ut one day or some other profession like , writer etc. So, if a common curriculum ...
^^
Line 7, column 933, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...like sports, writers, entrepreneurs etc. Hence diversification of study before g...
^^^^^
Line 9, column 2, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...ports, writers, entrepreneurs etc. Hence diversification of study before graduat...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, may, second, so, then, for example, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 19.5258426966 128% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 20.0 12.4196629213 161% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 14.8657303371 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.3162921348 133% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 33.0505617978 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 73.0 58.6224719101 125% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 12.9106741573 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2862.0 2235.4752809 128% => OK
No of words: 583.0 442.535393258 132% => OK
Chars per words: 4.90909090909 5.05705443957 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.91379618374 4.55969084622 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69087221934 2.79657885939 96% => OK
Unique words: 269.0 215.323595506 125% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.46140651801 0.4932671777 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 894.6 704.065955056 127% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 9.0 3.10617977528 290% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.2370786517 119% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 23.0359550562 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 77.184258254 60.3974514979 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.25 118.986275619 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.2916666667 23.4991977007 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.875 5.21951772744 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 7.80617977528 141% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.2758426966 117% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 5.13820224719 136% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.261236136879 0.243740707755 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0813827275638 0.0831039109588 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0852791587612 0.0758088955206 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.17106814216 0.150359130593 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0622677926334 0.0667264976115 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 14.1392134831 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 48.8420337079 114% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 12.1743820225 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 12.1639044944 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.91 8.38706741573 94% => OK
difficult_words: 114.0 100.480337079 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.8971910112 71% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 11.2143820225 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.