Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
In contemporary days, people have to face the dilemma of situations in which they must either accept bad situations that happen or ameliorate the issues. In my opinion, I would like to side with people who strive to change the situations in a better way.
Some people believe that when they deal with predicaments; acceptance is an optimal approach. The reason why is that they do not intend to take a risk or put more effort into these situations. For example, when a person would like to try to change a new job, they will compare to the previous one with some criteria such as salary, satisfaction, and working environment. Therefore, people want to assure that the new job will guarantee the above conditions.
However, striving and making situations better is the first choice I decide. Firstly, it is apparent that throughout human history, many inventions included bulbs, telephones, and the internet which invented by inventors who believed that they could contribute their effort to make life become better. Moreover, the most compelling argument is that the development of countries which was destroyed by a nuclear bomb in World War II. The relevant instance in Japan. After being bombed, Japan struggled with economic and labor problems. Despite that, with the never give up a mindset and continued effort; they become a leader in technology areas with iconic companies like Sony, Nintendo, Yamaha.
In conclusion, although there will be some dangers in changing situations, in order to succeed in a career and in life, people should have a positive attitude and overcome obstacles. Thus, I trust that endeavoring to enhance unfortunate situations is a much more reasonable approach.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 285, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ons is a much more reasonable approach.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, thus, for example, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 7.30460921844 219% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1438.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 277.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.19133574007 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78956972079 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.631768953069 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 448.2 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.9375868598 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.714285714 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7857142857 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.21428571429 7.06120827912 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.206103856155 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0652967891314 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0566485353056 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12415578027 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0632905660985 0.056905535591 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.31 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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