People who make decisions based on emotion and justify those decisions with logic afterwards are poor decision makers.
Emotions and logic have a history of being at a tussle with each other within a person. It's very difficult to make a decision keeping both in mind and we end up making the decision by giving the preference to either one of them. Once you make a decision by prioritizing any one of them, justifying by the other is confounding since your decision wasn't made on that basis in the first place. Therefore, I mostly agree that such kinds of decisions are poor.
Getting outside the comfort zone isn't very pleasing at the beginning and it's quite difficult. But once done, it makes us much stronger and confident. However, to get outside the box, emotions don't seem to work that well because they are meant to protect us. Consider this, a person is working in a company and he also lives at his parent's home. Now, the person receives an offer letter from another company that has better prospects, good salary and eventually leads to his growth. At this point, the person is befuddled with the decision of leaving his comfort zone or moving to a completely strange place and starting all over again. If he makes the decision of not leaving and staying where he is, chances are that he has just given up the biggest opportunity in his career just for the sake of leading a comfortable life during the prime of his career. From the above example, we can see that a decision that relies completely on emotions isn't always for the betterment of oneself.
Friendship is an important aspect of one's life. In fact, it's something that influences our being to a major extent. But friendship and growth for one shouldn't be mixed. Consider this, a student has to choose the streams for higher studies. He says that his friend is choosing computer science and so he wishes to be with him as he feels a lot happier being with someone he knows already. However, in the entirety of his life, this person hasn't worked on computers at all and instead he's well known for his novels and words. The reason for pursuing computer science was just because his friend has also chosen that and the job prospects are far better in that field. Now when confronted, why did you decide to choose this field with no previous experience, this person will not have any resounding answer to give during the interview. At this point, he has basically restricted his growth in the area he is well versed by the predisposition towards his friend. From the above example, we can see that emotional thinking without proper research and logical reasoning leads to one's peril
Although emotions are needed sometimes when making some important decisions of life, such as choosing the right partner. one cannot apply an algorithm and choose the correct partner for himself like how Sheldon cooper planned to do in "The Big Bang Theory". Instead, one feels affection and love towards the person and so they decide to spend the rest of their lives together. It is therefore in the best interest of a person that he should consider both the ends of the spectrum, logically and emotionally, before coming to a firm conclusion. Otherwise, thinking from one aspect only could lead to his doom.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 347, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: wasn't
...ther is confounding since your decision wasnt made on that basis in the first place. ...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: isn't
...or. Getting outside the comfort zone isnt very pleasing at the beginning and its ...
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Line 3, column 193, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...wever, to get outside the box, emotions dont seem to work that well because they are...
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Line 3, column 944, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: isn't
...sion that relies completely on emotions isnt always for the betterment of oneself. ...
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Line 5, column 38, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
... Friendship is an important aspect of ones life. In fact, its something that influ...
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Line 5, column 151, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: shouldn't
...tent. But friendship and growth for one shouldnt be mixed. Consider this, a student has ...
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Line 5, column 439, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: hasn't
...n the entirety of his life, this person hasnt worked on computers at all and instead ...
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Line 5, column 484, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: he's
... worked on computers at all and instead hes well known for his novels and words. Th...
^^^
Line 5, column 1075, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...research and logical reasoning leads to ones peril Although emotions are needed s...
^^^^
Line 7, column 122, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: One
...fe, such as choosing the right partner. one cannot apply an algorithm and choose th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, so, therefore, well, as to, in fact, such as, in the first place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 19.5258426966 97% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 12.4196629213 48% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 14.8657303371 141% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.3162921348 141% => OK
Pronoun: 66.0 33.0505617978 200% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 79.0 58.6224719101 135% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2608.0 2235.4752809 117% => OK
No of words: 552.0 442.535393258 125% => OK
Chars per words: 4.72463768116 5.05705443957 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.84713113593 4.55969084622 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48695134877 2.79657885939 89% => OK
Unique words: 286.0 215.323595506 133% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.518115942029 0.4932671777 105% => OK
syllable_count: 804.6 704.065955056 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 6.24550561798 176% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.99550561798 120% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.38483146067 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.2370786517 128% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.0771150888 60.3974514979 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.307692308 118.986275619 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2307692308 23.4991977007 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.65384615385 5.21951772744 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 7.80617977528 128% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 10.2758426966 136% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.13820224719 117% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.83258426966 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.192017018532 0.243740707755 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0561502343682 0.0831039109588 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0785652505553 0.0758088955206 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156141497656 0.150359130593 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.133912442568 0.0667264976115 201% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 14.1392134831 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 48.8420337079 120% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.1743820225 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.1 12.1639044944 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.6 8.38706741573 91% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 100.480337079 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.8971910112 76% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 347, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: wasn't
...ther is confounding since your decision wasnt made on that basis in the first place. ...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 34, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: isn't
...or. Getting outside the comfort zone isnt very pleasing at the beginning and its ...
^^^^
Line 3, column 193, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...wever, to get outside the box, emotions dont seem to work that well because they are...
^^^^
Line 3, column 944, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: isn't
...sion that relies completely on emotions isnt always for the betterment of oneself. ...
^^^^
Line 5, column 38, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
... Friendship is an important aspect of ones life. In fact, its something that influ...
^^^^
Line 5, column 151, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: shouldn't
...tent. But friendship and growth for one shouldnt be mixed. Consider this, a student has ...
^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 439, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: hasn't
...n the entirety of his life, this person hasnt worked on computers at all and instead ...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 484, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: he's
... worked on computers at all and instead hes well known for his novels and words. Th...
^^^
Line 5, column 1075, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...research and logical reasoning leads to ones peril Although emotions are needed s...
^^^^
Line 7, column 122, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: One
...fe, such as choosing the right partner. one cannot apply an algorithm and choose th...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, so, therefore, well, as to, in fact, such as, in the first place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 19.5258426966 97% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 12.4196629213 48% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 14.8657303371 141% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.3162921348 141% => OK
Pronoun: 66.0 33.0505617978 200% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 79.0 58.6224719101 135% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2608.0 2235.4752809 117% => OK
No of words: 552.0 442.535393258 125% => OK
Chars per words: 4.72463768116 5.05705443957 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.84713113593 4.55969084622 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48695134877 2.79657885939 89% => OK
Unique words: 286.0 215.323595506 133% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.518115942029 0.4932671777 105% => OK
syllable_count: 804.6 704.065955056 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 6.24550561798 176% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.99550561798 120% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.38483146067 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.2370786517 128% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.0771150888 60.3974514979 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.307692308 118.986275619 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2307692308 23.4991977007 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.65384615385 5.21951772744 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 7.80617977528 128% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 10.2758426966 136% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.13820224719 117% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.83258426966 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.192017018532 0.243740707755 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0561502343682 0.0831039109588 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0785652505553 0.0758088955206 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156141497656 0.150359130593 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.133912442568 0.0667264976115 201% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 14.1392134831 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 48.8420337079 120% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.1743820225 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.1 12.1639044944 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.6 8.38706741573 91% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 100.480337079 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.8971910112 76% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.