Science and technology will one day be able to solve all of society’s problems.
There is no doubt that science and technology will one day be able to solve most of, if not all of the society's problems.
The precedent has already been set in the favour of science and technology if one just takes a quick glance on the history of society. From the prehistoric times to the modern ones, science and technology have ushered a revolution one after another , changing how the society works and helped it to overcome obstacles once thought to be invincible. Humans have come a long way from fearing a mere lighting strikes to controling their environments at will, thanks to science and technology.
A point can be made that certain problems still remain out of the reach of the current technology like human brain or our universe. But such statements should be scrutanized, as time and again, science and techology have pulled through, it only remains the question of time. Early astronomers like galalio couldn't have imagined that we would have humans on Moon, it was unfathomable, but we did land on the Moon all thanks to science and technology. We have now envisioned a greater aim to land and colonize Mars. In th latter part of the 20th century the worries of food shortage due to booming population were raising. Portentous statements, like there would be mass starvation due to food shortage, were made but science and techonology pulled though. Now we have genetically modified seeds which are resistant to pests and droughts. Hence its only a matter of time that science and technology presents us with solutions to current pressing issues.
In conclussion, science and technology have been always the forebears in finding the solutions to society's problems and will continue to be. Hence it can be definately be said the one day science and technology will slove all of society's problems.
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- Science and technology will one day be able to solve all of society s problems 50
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...ne day be able to solve most of, if not all of the societys problems. The precedent has...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...e ushered a revolution one after another , changing how the society works and help...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: couldn't
...of time. Early astronomers like galalio couldnt have imagined that we would have humans...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...ch are resistant to pests and droughts. Hence its only a matter of time that science ...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...ietys problems and will continue to be. Hence it can be definately be said the one da...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, so, still, no doubt
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 19.5258426966 77% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.4196629213 72% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 14.8657303371 128% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.3162921348 44% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 33.0505617978 48% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 58.6224719101 70% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 12.9106741573 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1516.0 2235.4752809 68% => OK
No of words: 307.0 442.535393258 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93811074919 5.05705443957 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.55969084622 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73017779724 2.79657885939 98% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 215.323595506 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.560260586319 0.4932671777 114% => OK
syllable_count: 473.4 704.065955056 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.2370786517 69% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.3951455221 60.3974514979 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 108.285714286 118.986275619 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9285714286 23.4991977007 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.5 5.21951772744 48% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.467933638657 0.243740707755 192% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.165286787759 0.0831039109588 199% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.188325965659 0.0758088955206 248% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.392480712146 0.150359130593 261% => Maybe some contents are duplicated.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.213661481827 0.0667264976115 320% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 14.1392134831 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 48.8420337079 120% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.1743820225 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 12.1639044944 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.23 8.38706741573 98% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 100.480337079 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.8971910112 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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