Discussing controversial topics with those with contrasting views is not useful because very few people change their mind when questioned about their core beliefs.
Write a response to the prompt in which you discuss whether or not you agree or disagree. Be certain to fully develop your position and carefully consider ways in which your position could be challenged.
The idea of discussing controversial topic between two different ideology people will lead into debate.While both of them strong points which strengthens their view. The prompt recommends that the a few of them will change in their view on the issue when pointed out about their core understanding. On balance, However I agree that the few people change their opinion on topic discussing which comes with valid reasons.
First of all, coming to a common ground on controversial topic is itself is very difficult. People with very different ideology needs to be broad and view the issue from the eyes of the opponent and then may understand the other persons views on the topic, on basis that he took that stand and may assess based on that and come to conclusion. For Instance , In the Cricket the bowler may appeal for out, and the umpire may not give wicket, the bowler should convince captain to take a review, but ultimately captain should assess bases on his view and listen to bowler and take the decision. A very few people come to decision based on the bowler's view.
In Conclusion, Although most of them doesn't change their view on the issue, a very few change their opinion based on the correct analysis on the topic.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 104, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: While
...t ideology people will lead into debate.While both of them strong points which streng...
^^^^^
Line 1, column 104, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...t ideology people will lead into debate.While both of them strong points which streng...
^^^^^
Line 1, column 194, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'the' or 'a' is left.
Suggestion: the; a
... their view. The prompt recommends that the a few of them will change in their view o...
^^^^^
Line 1, column 336, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ng. On balance, However I agree that the few people change their opinion on topic...
^^
Line 3, column 356, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...hat and come to conclusion. For Instance , In the Cricket the bowler may appeal fo...
^^
Line 5, column 15, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...d on the bowlers view. In Conclusion, Although most of them doesnt change thei...
^^
Line 5, column 39, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
... In Conclusion, Although most of them doesnt change their view on the issue, a very ...
^^^^^^
Line 5, column 85, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun change seems to be countable; consider using: 'few changes'.
Suggestion: few changes
... change their view on the issue, a very few change their opinion based on the correct anal...
^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, may, so, then, while, for instance, in conclusion, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 19.5258426966 15% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.4196629213 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 14.8657303371 54% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.3162921348 71% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 33.0505617978 54% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 58.6224719101 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 12.9106741573 15% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1021.0 2235.4752809 46% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 214.0 442.535393258 48% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.77102803738 5.05705443957 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82475343497 4.55969084622 84% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46741446185 2.79657885939 88% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 215.323595506 52% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.523364485981 0.4932671777 106% => OK
syllable_count: 305.1 704.065955056 43% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 6.24550561798 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 20.2370786517 40% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 23.0359550562 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.5904867099 60.3974514979 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.625 118.986275619 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.75 23.4991977007 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0 5.21951772744 211% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.97078651685 60% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 7.80617977528 102% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 10.2758426966 39% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.331708278363 0.243740707755 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.16677370068 0.0831039109588 201% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0947739828618 0.0758088955206 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.239302244802 0.150359130593 159% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.111041101809 0.0667264976115 166% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 14.1392134831 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.01 48.8420337079 127% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 12.1743820225 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 12.1639044944 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.03 8.38706741573 96% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 100.480337079 42% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 11.2143820225 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 33.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 104, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: While
...t ideology people will lead into debate.While both of them strong points which streng...
^^^^^
Line 1, column 104, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...t ideology people will lead into debate.While both of them strong points which streng...
^^^^^
Line 1, column 194, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'the' or 'a' is left.
Suggestion: the; a
... their view. The prompt recommends that the a few of them will change in their view o...
^^^^^
Line 1, column 336, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ng. On balance, However I agree that the few people change their opinion on topic...
^^
Line 3, column 356, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...hat and come to conclusion. For Instance , In the Cricket the bowler may appeal fo...
^^
Line 5, column 15, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...d on the bowlers view. In Conclusion, Although most of them doesnt change thei...
^^
Line 5, column 39, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
... In Conclusion, Although most of them doesnt change their view on the issue, a very ...
^^^^^^
Line 5, column 85, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun change seems to be countable; consider using: 'few changes'.
Suggestion: few changes
... change their view on the issue, a very few change their opinion based on the correct anal...
^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, may, so, then, while, for instance, in conclusion, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 19.5258426966 15% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.4196629213 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 14.8657303371 54% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.3162921348 71% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 33.0505617978 54% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 58.6224719101 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 12.9106741573 15% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1021.0 2235.4752809 46% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 214.0 442.535393258 48% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.77102803738 5.05705443957 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82475343497 4.55969084622 84% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46741446185 2.79657885939 88% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 215.323595506 52% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.523364485981 0.4932671777 106% => OK
syllable_count: 305.1 704.065955056 43% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 6.24550561798 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 20.2370786517 40% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 23.0359550562 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.5904867099 60.3974514979 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.625 118.986275619 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.75 23.4991977007 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0 5.21951772744 211% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.97078651685 60% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 7.80617977528 102% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 10.2758426966 39% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.331708278363 0.243740707755 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.16677370068 0.0831039109588 201% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0947739828618 0.0758088955206 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.239302244802 0.150359130593 159% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.111041101809 0.0667264976115 166% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 14.1392134831 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.01 48.8420337079 127% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 12.1743820225 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 12.1639044944 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.03 8.38706741573 96% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 100.480337079 42% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 11.2143820225 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 33.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.