Undergraduate students majoring in Business or in the Sciences should not be required to take any courses in the Humanities since those courses won’t benefit their future careers.
Write a response to the prompt in which you discuss whether or not you agree or disagree. Be certain to fully develop your position and carefully consider ways in which your position could be challenged.
This topic raises a issue whether the undergraduate student who major in Bussiness or in the Sciences does not require Humanities subject in their degree or not. The prompt recommends that the people do not require Humanities for persuing undergraduation. While there are strengths and weaknesses for this issue. On Balance, however, I disagree with the promt and include Humanities in the curriculum.
Firstly, I feel every undergraduate or same level of degree student should take Humanities subject, it would teach them ethics and values one should have in their life. Also students use these ethics and values while persuing their career and it will be much helpfull for them in making any sensitive decision involving other people lives. Author specifically speakes about Business or the Science, well, if we consider Business, for example he will be leading certain number of employees under him and take crucial decisions based work done by them.
Some may argue that complete use of time on the core subject will yield in better score there by better career, but I strong do not recommend that, how usefull is your career when you don't know how to value other peoples work and appreaciation, it may even lead to downfall of your career. For Instance, West Indies cricketer S. Powell who is extraordinary batsman but could not control his anger on field and bullies fellow player, he lacks ethics and values.
In conclusion, although the prompt suggests that undergraduate students should only focus core subject , I would suggest that having Humanities subject in the curriculum is important to deal with real life and to interact with people all around world.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, may, so, well, while, for example, for instance, i feel, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 19.5258426966 31% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 12.4196629213 89% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 14.8657303371 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.3162921348 71% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 33.0505617978 88% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 58.6224719101 48% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 12.9106741573 39% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1405.0 2235.4752809 63% => OK
No of words: 274.0 442.535393258 62% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12773722628 5.05705443957 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.55969084622 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66769842299 2.79657885939 95% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 215.323595506 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.627737226277 0.4932671777 127% => OK
syllable_count: 422.1 704.065955056 60% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 20.2370786517 54% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 23.0359550562 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 75.6299166833 60.3974514979 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.727272727 118.986275619 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.9090909091 23.4991977007 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0 5.21951772744 192% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 7.80617977528 77% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.206707226999 0.243740707755 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0706686847673 0.0831039109588 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0610764476893 0.0758088955206 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115831851695 0.150359130593 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0486834761254 0.0667264976115 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 14.1392134831 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 48.8420337079 114% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 12.1743820225 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.77 12.1639044944 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.69 8.38706741573 104% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 100.480337079 67% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.8971910112 71% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 11.2143820225 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.