You and your family are living in rented accommodation in an English speaking country. You are not satisfied with the condition of some of the furniture.
Write a letter to your landlord. In your letter
introduce yourself
explain what is wrong with the furniture
say what action you would like the landlord to take
Dear Maxi,
I am writing this letter to let you know about condition of some of the furniture of our villa.
I am John your new tenant of Villa 64, downing street and recently shifted last fortnight here from India with my spouse and two kids.
Your Villa is very nice specially i find decoration in lving room pretty impressive. My wife loved direct sunlight coming to our bed room and children spends most of their free time on swing at terrace. Its a very good accomodation to start with in UK. While every thing is quite satisfactory,i would like to seek your attention on couple of issues which we found in last weeks.
My wife noticed that one foot of the master bedroom's bed is broken. Though we are still able to slip on it without any issue, worry is that someday bed may collapse and apparantely it can hurt us as well.
Another issue is with sofa in kichten cabinet. We found that wood of kitchen cabinet got quite rotten probably due to leakage in the water pipe going through it. We want to use this cabinet to keep raw food
and bit worried that food will get spoiled in damped atmosphere.
I request you to send carpenter and get the above issues fixed. If all can't be done together, our priority will be to get the bed fixed first. Looking forward to your response.
Regards, Shailabh.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 61, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...tter to let you know about condition of some of the furniture of our villa. I am John yo...
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Line 6, column 35, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ds. Your Villa is very nice specially i find decoration in lving room pretty im...
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Line 6, column 204, Rule ID: IT_IS[17]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: It's; It is
...of their free time on swing at terrace. Its a very good accomodation to start with ...
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Line 6, column 293, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , i
... While every thing is quite satisfactory,i would like to seek your attention on co...
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Line 6, column 294, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...While every thing is quite satisfactory,i would like to seek your attention on co...
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Line 8, column 206, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ant to use this cabinet to keep raw food and bit worried that food will get spoil...
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Line 11, column 72, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
... and get the above issues fixed. If all cant be done together, our priority will be ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, look, may, so, still, well, while, you know, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 26.3917525773 148% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1079.0 937.175257732 115% => OK
No of words: 239.0 206.0 116% => OK
Chars per words: 4.51464435146 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93187294222 3.78020617076 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.29242123357 2.54303337028 90% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 127.690721649 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.682008368201 0.622605031667 110% => OK
syllable_count: 328.5 290.88556701 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.0419581916 44.8134815571 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.0714285714 76.5299724578 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0714285714 16.8248392259 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.92857142857 4.34317383033 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.29896907216 163% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 2.54639175258 275% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.161085631979 0.216113520407 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0505703096581 0.0766984524023 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0576638240291 0.0603063233224 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0730645688582 0.12726935374 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0698796621119 0.0580467560999 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.3 8.37731958763 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.58 8.71597938144 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.39 7.59969072165 97% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 41.2886597938 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 81.4606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.25 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.