When choosing a job, the salary is the most important consideration. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Topic is believed to be one of the most common issue in today's contemporary life. This is a widely-held claim that the vast majority of people prefer to select the job to settle down wage. Personally, I strongly oppose to this view. It seems to me that atmosphere of workplace, demeanour and esteem are the most important between staffs. This essey will be discussed pros and cons of it.
Undoubtedly, people should pay more expenditure such as education, gastronomy, impost and department of health. Therefore, mass folk choose job found on salary. If we choose a job, we should pay special attention to respect and workplace. Because, when we work, we should enjoy with our job and ourselves, and also we should feel honour and treatment from our colleagues or our boss, as well as, all staffs should deem us all-in-all person. Practically, wage of work is in the second place. It would be good your future, if you choose job to pay attention the above advices. In the forthcoming paragraph I intend to support my views with appropriate examples before reaching the conclusion.
On the other hand, today people are suffering from privation. Because of that it would cohere people's salary. In life of city, people should go to expense more food. Not only in cities, but also people of villages should pay more to food. Therefore, people desire to earn much money, as well as, they have to choose their jobs based on salary. Furthermore, humans should pay bills, health care and education in each month or year. So, today, the majority people consider that salary is more important than interaction in work in out-of-date life.
Taking all the above into account it may be concluded that in spite of the fact that salary might be more necessary, but, in my opinion, interaction of work and its atmosphere are the most important thing when choosing the job.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, may, second, so, therefore, well, such as, as well as, in my opinion, in spite of, in the second place, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1551.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 319.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.86206896552 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22617688928 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62177685897 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.570532915361 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 477.9 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 47.573732248 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.55 106.682146367 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.95 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.45 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.161427988666 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0456073818145 0.084324248473 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0551535437255 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107785749886 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0480337496802 0.056905535591 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 13.0946893788 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 50.2224549098 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.61 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.8 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.