Task 2
Some people believe that allowing children to make their own choices on everyday matters (such as food, clothes and entertainment) is likely to result in a society of individuals who only think about their own wishes. Other people believe that it is important for children to make decisions about matters that affect them.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
According to some people, permitting children to decide on their food, clothes and entertainment would develop selfishness in their mind. However, others opine that it is essential for them to take decisions on their own needs. This essay briefly discusses both the views and concludes that supporting children to choose their choices would be beneficial as it enhances their decision making capacity in the future.
On the one hand, providing liberty for children to choose their food, costumes and leisure activities would incorporate more self- centred thoughts in them. When children make choices on their own in day-to-day life, they will not consider the decisions of other individuals. For instance, if a child wants to have its favourite recipe everyday, it will not take other family members preferences into account. Undoubtedly, this would change them into selfish individuals.
On the other hand, granting freedom to make own choices for children could improve their ability of making decisions in critical circumstances. Allowing them to decide on basic needs would increase their confidence and so they would be able resolve conflicts by taking wise verdicts in the future. For example, many psychological studies state that children with good decision making ability will be confident and independent in their adulthood. Henceforth, children have to pick what they want in daily life, which would help them to develop their personality in the future.
In conclusion, some believe allowing kids to make decisions on daily routines would result in creating selfish adults, while certain people think that it is necessary for them to make such decisions. On analysing both views, though it enhances Selfish thoughts of kids, decision making capacity is crucial to solve serious problems like finacial crisis and relationship issues in the future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
briefly, hence, however, if, so, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1578.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 290.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.44137931034 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69968069632 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.541379310345 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 477.9 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.6778622241 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.384615385 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3076923077 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.61538461538 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.291359203237 0.244688304435 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112620178415 0.084324248473 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0730176410851 0.0667982634062 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.186811953727 0.151304729494 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0418496118366 0.056905535591 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.57 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.81 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.