The continued rise in the world’s population is the greatest problem faced by humanity at the present time.
What are the causes of this continued rise? Do you agree that it is the greatest problem faced by humanity?
The population of the world is increasing tremendously. Some people even believe that currently, it is the most pressing issue for humanity. This essay will discuss the reasons for the ever-rising global population and argue why it is the number one concern at the moment.
The most prominent cause of the growing world population is the decline in the death rate. Due to the technological advancement in health care, many people recover from illnesses, which otherwise could be fatal. Malignancies and tumours, for example, a couple of decades ago, were considered untreatable; however, with modern medicine, almost all incurable diseases can be cured or at least have become manageable. Another major factor of growing population size is the fall in the infant mortality rate. Present-day women have better access to education and medical facilities, which have increased awareness about pregnancy and post-natal care. To exemplify, there was a considerable drop in miscarriages after pre-and post-pregnancy awareness campaigns in developing countries, like India and Nepal.
The main reason why economists and scientists have suddenly shown their interest in demography is that the rising world population will become the root cause of many worldly problems. The smaller picture of this evident in many underdeveloped nations as these regions have a larger population and are facing food scarcity, faster depletion of resources, and higher unemployment and crime rates. If the population continues to grow, then those days are not far when the entire world will face the same issues like that of underdeveloped countries. So, nowadays, it is of paramount concern for everyone around the world.
To conclude, although modern health care and educational facilities are the stepping stones for development, these also have dire consequences for the individual, the society and the government.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, so, then, at least, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1615.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 292.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.53082191781 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98560025388 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.623287671233 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 514.8 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.163668766 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.357142857 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8571428571 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.57142857143 7.06120827912 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.151437222552 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0537272412519 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0509451480327 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0746390719009 0.151304729494 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0671138533681 0.056905535591 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.26 50.2224549098 68% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.79 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.6 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.