You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
Write about the following topic.
Some people say that advertising encourages us to buy things that we really do not need. Others say that advertisements tell us about new products that may improve our lives.
Which viewpoint do you agree with?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
You should write at least 250 words.
Advertising is like the lifeline of any product and promotes it for market efficiency. Some people deem it as encouragement toward buying unnecessary things while others consider it as a positive message, telling us about products to improve the standard of life. In the following paragraphs, I will discuss both viewpoints before giving my opinion.
Considering advertisements as an encouragement to buy goods that are not necessarily required is not something prejudicing. Advertisements are meant for promoting the company product with the final purpose of people buying it, therefore, it is not a wrong thing to consider as something negative. For example, If Coca-cola does not advertise its beverages, there is no way people will buy them or will know about them and as result, the company would not generating any profit. Hence, advertising even if encouraging unnecessary expenditure is the backbone of company profits.
The belief that it helps to improve our lives is not wrong either because advertisement may be there to motivate people about buying things but it does not mean that it does so without giving any information about the product. Each advertisement contains some kind of information regarding the product, mostly positive. The example of Frooti is a perfect embodiment of this as in this advertisement, it is displayed what is the Frooti made of such as Mangoes. Moreover, the advertisement may offer additional information about the product ingredients to encourage viewers to buy the product.
I agree with the second viewpoint rather than the first one more, not because the first one is wrong. The first viewpoint is right considering the general purpose of advertisement is to sell goods. However, in the end, the consumers are the ones responsible for buying the product and they can decide so by watching the advertisement which gives at least some quick information about the product.
To hammer the nail in the coffin, people can have different opinions regarding advertisement and what it promotes but that does not change the actual message or intention of the adverts.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 456, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'would' requires the base form of the verb: 'generate'
Suggestion: generate
...em and as result, the company would not generating any profit. Hence, advertising even if ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, hence, however, if, may, moreover, regarding, second, so, therefore, while, at least, for example, kind of, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1780.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 339.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.25073746313 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29091512845 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05261421512 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.513274336283 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 565.2 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.249235721 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.666666667 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.46666666667 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.335337664231 0.244688304435 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.114566877854 0.084324248473 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0874981728376 0.0667982634062 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.182823191991 0.151304729494 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0928387455756 0.056905535591 163% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.47 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.22 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.