The diagram shows how chocolate is produced. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant
The picture illustrates the procedure of making chocolate. Overall, there are 10 stages beginning with cocoa trees are grown and ending up with chocolate liquid is produced.
In the first step, the farmer collects the ripe red pods from the cacao trees which are grown in South America, Africa, and Indonesia. After being chopped, the pods let the white cacao beans appear. Then the farmer harvests and covers those beans with banana leaves in order to let the beans suffer from the fermentation. After fermenting, those beans turn to red color and be spread under the sun light until dried. And then they are put in large sacks.
Subsequently, train or lorry will transport a number of large sacks filled with dried beans to the factory. In the factory, those beans are roasted by the heat systems. The next step is that the roasted beans are crushed and be divided into 2 parts: inner part and outer part. Finally, the inner part of beans is kept and put in a machine with the pressing function. Thanks to that machine, the beans finally produce liquid chocolate.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 33.7804878049 80% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 887.0 965.302439024 92% => OK
No of words: 185.0 196.424390244 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.79459459459 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68801715136 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.26675403375 2.65546596893 85% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 106.607317073 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.583783783784 0.547539520022 107% => OK
syllable_count: 261.9 283.868780488 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 22.4926829268 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.9491892038 43.030603864 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.9166666667 112.824112599 66% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.4166666667 22.9334400587 67% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.0 5.23603664747 38% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0250676280391 0.215688989381 12% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0123731956761 0.103423049105 12% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0222451907927 0.0843802449381 26% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0250316915557 0.15604864568 16% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0257553433962 0.0819641961636 31% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 13.2329268293 67% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 61.2550243902 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.3012195122 66% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.21 11.4140731707 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.54 8.06136585366 94% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 40.7170731707 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.9970731707 73% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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