Some people think young people should go to university to further their education while others think they should be encouraged to work as car mechanics or builders etc. to serve society. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
With the Advent of 21st century number of inventions came to see that were unimagined also five decades ago. Education is one from them, people are much aware about study than past. Demos prefer to get university level Education, which is main aspect for making career and number of people support to them for being graduated. Whereas, a host of people believe that children should be encouraged towards work instead of study for making society facilitate. In my point of view, Education has a indispensable role in every sector. Therefore, pupils should go to universities. These both sides will be explained in upcoming paragraphs.
To begin with, it is stated that students should go to universities for completing graduation after finishing secondary education. Because, every job requires qualifications whether it is mechanism or building construction work. In this technical work every information regarding work is based on computer. Therefore, person person should be qualified for being much successful. As it is said Education is the key of success. Demos are paid on the bases of their study. For example, workshop mechanics in companies have high earnings than local market mechanics.
In contrast, opponents of this statement deem that secondary education is enough for a person. After that, they should go for work such as mechanism and building construction because of some reasons. First of all, increasing rate of unemployment in many countries. Most of the people are attracted towards white collar jobs. Due to this, high competition can be seen for every employment. Secondly, people have lost interest in local works after being much educated. Because of this, societies have to conflict some serious issues in terms of lack of workers. That's why workers demand for high rates that encourages inflation as well.
In conclusion, although, after being much educated inhabitants require higher posts that are impossible to provide to everyone and lack of local workers get to see.
But, Education has an essential part in everyone's life and success can not be imagined without study.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: person
...g work is based on computer. Therefore, person person should be qualified for being much succ...
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Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...be qualified for being much successful. As it is said Education is the key of succ...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: That's
...ous issues in terms of lack of workers. Thats why workers demand for high rates that ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, regarding, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, whereas, for example, in conclusion, in contrast, such as, first of all, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1771.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 336.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.27083333333 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28139028586 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80332340173 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.60119047619 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 554.4 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 16.0721442886 149% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.0778312825 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.7916666667 106.682146367 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.0 20.7667163134 67% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.58333333333 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 12.0 3.4128256513 352% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.243843268457 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0669202303191 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0488402641875 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122769286045 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0671014846022 0.056905535591 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 50.2224549098 114% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 11.3001002004 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.69 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.98 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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