In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people.
Why is this the case? Do you think this is a positive or negative situation?
People in many nations consider having a house on your own instead of leasing one as absolutely vital. Reasons for this phenomenon vary greatly and it should be regarded as an unfavorable idea.
The ever-increasing interests in real estate possession stem from social norms and the potential long-term values of having a house. In numerous cultural backgrounds, particularly in Asian societies, owning a home has long been symbolized as a fundamental element for career prosperity since people are often told that only when a person has purchased a house can he starts embarking on his business. Therefore, a majority of people are under an intangible pressure from family and the community to justify their economic achievements by buying their own houses. Moreover, it cannot be denied that accommodation is a promising field of investment because the population is growing exponentially and demands for housing are quickly rising accordingly. As a result, it might be a fairly auspicious venture to purchase a house and put it on sale for larger profit later on.
Although the notion of owning an apartment may sound tempting, it is highly likely that this trend will do more harm than good to most people. Regarding social aspects, individuals are prone to undesired agony resulting from the society’s prejudice against people living in rental houses rather than owning one. As the society associates home ownership with a status of affluence, those who are not able to afford their own homes are inclined to the trauma of insecurities. Given the economic facets, rocketing enthusiasms in housing speculation pose the threat of inflation in this field as house prices will be considerably exaggerated. Following this, people who take out a bank loan for housing investment will suffer from a capital loss when they have to pay an exorbitant amount far exceeding the real value of the real estate property.
In conclusion, the perception that home ownership is more pivotal than renting one has its social and economic attributes which are also the main causes to make this situation a harmful tendency.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, if, may, moreover, regarding, so, therefore, thus, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1772.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 342.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.18128654971 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30037696126 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90566782503 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 211.0 176.041082164 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.616959064327 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 573.3 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 45.0725910231 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.307692308 106.682146367 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.3076923077 20.7667163134 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.76923076923 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.231848775731 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0789157431844 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0485436164405 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150572589592 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0449239671784 0.056905535591 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 13.0946893788 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 50.2224549098 73% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.06 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.05 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 111.0 78.4519038076 141% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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