Some people feel that young people should follow the traditions of their society. Others, however, believe that young people should be free to behave as individuals. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
The young's orientation has been highlighted as a controversial topic of public attention due to its implication on social development. Some people believe that young generations should adhere to the traditional heritage of society, while others think that it is a better idea for individuals to behave in their ways. From my perspective, there is a need for harmony combination between traditions and innovations.
On the one hand, young people should follow conventional norms for several reasons. First, traditional heritage was the selection and lessons based on practical experience of predecessors, which was the great foundation for the young future. For example, in the agriculture industry, there are a ton of older generations' advice that was conducive to grow plants and fauna without using fertilizers and preservatives, ensuring life security in every field for the young. Second, young people take responsibility to maintain traditional values. To be more specific, in terms of marriage, in Vietnam, Vietnamese young generations should get married before reaching the age of 30, if not, the woman could be in difficulty in pregnancy and producing, thereby reducing the states of happiness after marriage.
On the other hand, the reasons to support the idea that young individuals should create their own decision in lives. First, since the world has constantly changed over time, such traditions might not be appropriate for the young at that time, therefore, they break the traditional norms and innovate their standard for adaptation. Secondly, because of the increasingly individualistic lifestyle, they are free of expressing themselves by what they do and plan regardless of traditions. It means that each shows a unique characteristic, as a result, there is no specific standard that could limit their behavior, which is a great contribution to society by their creativity and imagination.
In conclusion, both of suggestions have benefits to the young orientation, so I suppose to think that young generation should selective the values of both ideas to their best development.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 310, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'generations'' or 'generation's'?
Suggestion: generations'; generation's
...ture industry, there are a ton of older generations advice that was conducive to grow plant...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, as to, for example, i suppose, in conclusion, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1782.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 325.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.48307692308 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24591054749 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.17892468143 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.590769230769 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 548.1 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 55.8457300259 49.4020404114 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.076923077 106.682146367 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.1538461538 7.06120827912 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.353925104786 0.244688304435 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.12805561032 0.084324248473 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.102289245571 0.0667982634062 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.210458489895 0.151304729494 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0341275884482 0.056905535591 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.9 13.0946893788 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.8 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.44 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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