News editors decide what to broadcast on television and what to print in newspapers. What factors do you think influence these decisions? Do we become used to bad news, and would it be better if more good news was reported?
There are many factors that influence news editors to decide what to show on television and what to print in newspapers. It is true that nowadays, many people used to watch or receive bad news, but I believe that our life would be better if more good news reports.
To begin with, there are several factors that influence news editors. The first factor is the interest of readers and viewers. For example, currently, the Coronavirus disease is spreading everywhere so everyone’s concern is to know the number of infected people each day in newspapers or television. The second factor is the responsibility of news editors to inform the public about important information to people that must be accurate and reliable. The final factor is owners. They are pressured by owners who employ them. They always have to be creative to create new programs or news to attract viewers and readers which brings profit for the company .
It seems to me that people now become accustomed to negative news. For example, we watch so many stories about war, crime, and natural disasters that our thoughts are negative affected by different people. Even they become cynical about the world. In my opinion, I prefer to see more positive news than negative news. For example, on TV should be show stories about good people such as a man who promptly saved a 3 years old girl who fell down from a 12th-floor apartment or doctors are working all day to treat patients be infected with Covid- 19. Therefore, we know that there are many good people in our life. Furthermore, we feel that this life has more meaning.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
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Message: Did you mean 'showed', 'shown'?
Suggestion: showed; shown
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, if, second, so, therefore, for example, such as, in my opinion, it is true, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1327.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.82545454545 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53217843788 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.578181818182 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 414.0 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 55.8558062671 49.4020404114 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.9375 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1875 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.125 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.329197876106 0.244688304435 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107043281467 0.084324248473 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.113869617555 0.0667982634062 170% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.265009659205 0.151304729494 175% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.159335792911 0.056905535591 280% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.44 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.75 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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