Universities should require every student to take a variety of courses outside the student's field of study.
Education is a continuous learning process to every individual.And one could achieve great heights and inspire others in life through education.And giving its due importance,Education shouldn't be restrained only to university but also to be acquired from other possible classes wherein,One could always broaden their horizon and make remarkable contributions to the society and the respected field of study.But,there are many instances where students only with university study have made a breakthrough and made people's lives easier through their work.
Additional education to the student always inspires them to learn and prosper more in the given field of study,It always keeps them inclined to whatever work.Furthermore in any country,Its prosperity always lies in Science Technology Engineering and Mathematics(STEM) and these are the fields which always require people to provide themselves with variety of courses apart from the university study.Also,a recent mandatory guideline has been taken by the AICTE ,India,wherein all the engineering college students have to participate and achieve valid additional courses as part of their regular study.These acts encourage the process of expanding one's limits and helps them to contribute much more to their field of study.
However,There have been many real time instances seen wherein people only with university study have made breakthrough and achieved great heights in ones' field.For instance the food delivery apps which are very popular in the urban localities are created by a group of students who have just completed their university degree.And these have revolutionized the way people think about the food business.These students stood out from the others and laid great future for coming generations in the field of food business.
Additional Courses will always help in brighten and finding many interesting ventures in every field of study and keep the students filled with knowledge.But this alone doesn't limit the possibilities and outcomes of a student to exceed and contribute in one's own field.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, so, apart from, for instance, of course
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 19.5258426966 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 12.4196629213 24% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 14.8657303371 135% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.3162921348 35% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 33.0505617978 51% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 58.6224719101 77% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1762.0 2235.4752809 79% => OK
No of words: 312.0 442.535393258 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.64743589744 5.05705443957 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.55969084622 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.16039943505 2.79657885939 113% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 215.323595506 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.560897435897 0.4932671777 114% => OK
syllable_count: 551.7 704.065955056 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.59117977528 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 1.77640449438 225% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 4.38483146067 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 20.2370786517 20% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 78.0 23.0359550562 339% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 160.474881212 60.3974514979 266% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 440.5 118.986275619 370% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 78.0 23.4991977007 332% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 19.0 5.21951772744 364% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 26.0 7.80617977528 333% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 10.2758426966 39% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.264558866957 0.243740707755 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.176179663296 0.0831039109588 212% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.054438882941 0.0758088955206 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.176179663296 0.150359130593 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.054438882941 0.0667264976115 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 44.2 14.1392134831 313% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -24.61 48.8420337079 -50% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 19.3 7.92365168539 244% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 36.1 12.1743820225 297% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 16.67 12.1639044944 137% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 12.06 8.38706741573 144% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 100.480337079 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 31.0 11.8971910112 261% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 33.2 11.2143820225 296% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 31.0 11.7820224719 263% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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