It is commonly believed that nowadays main factors that affect a child's development are media, pop culture and friends. A different point of view is that family plays the most significant role.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Many people believe that children nowadays are heavily affected by social media, pop culture and trends going around on the internet. However, I believe that parents still have a stronger influence on the child’s growth because it is the parents who can interfere directly in children’s daily life.
Firstly, most children nowadays watch TV and binge on video games for leisure instead of participating in outdoor activities. As a result, the more they are exposed to social media and trends on the internet, the more they are influenced by them. TikTok is one of the fastest-growing platforms on the web nowadays and browsing through the app, it is noticeable that many users are under the age of 12. Another thing is that children often copy behaviors that they assumed cool, but at such a young age, it is hard for them to tell if the behaviors are good or bad. Therefore, they are easily affected by trends or what their peers considered fashionable.
However, because children are unable to detect what is harmful to them, it is the parent’s responsibility to create a safe environment for their children. As breadwinners, modern parents are too caught up with the hustle and bustle of life, they have higher demand material-wise, which sometimes causing them to neglect their children. An emotionally secure environment at home is critical for the child's confidence and self-development. Moreover, parents should also set boundaries for their children. The child’s choices later in life depend on the values instilled in them by their parents. Therefore, parents hold more substantial sway over their offspring than media, pop culture and friends circle.
In conclusion, I think it is the parents who set the stage for the child’s development. With moderate control and restriction, parents can create a proper environment for their children.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, so, still, therefore, another thing, i think, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1567.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 301.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.20598006645 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93092932104 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.554817275748 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 470.7 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.6540570445 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.466666667 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0666666667 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.13333333333 7.06120827912 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0905871006853 0.244688304435 37% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0369906586923 0.084324248473 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0461563034039 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0650167548277 0.151304729494 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0451133536616 0.056905535591 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.62 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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