Men and women, because of their inherent physical differences, are not equally suited for many tasks.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compelling reasons and/or examples that could be used to challenge your position.
Some might argue that due to the inherent physical differences between men and women, they are not equally suited for many tasks. Others, however, might posit that they are equally suited for many tasks - if not all - regardless of their differences in terms of physicality. After considering the available evidences, it is clear that men and women are not equally suited for many tasks.
To begin with, in many rural communities in Africa, men are the sole benefactors of the family. These men relie on work ranging from subsistence farming and hunting to feed their families. Due to the absence of any form of technological advancement in these communities and the arduous nature of the work that needs to be done, productivity becomes a function of sheer strength and muscle power. While in rare cases women might partake in these activities, men are usually at the receiving end of this strenous work due to the sinewy and thewy nature of their bodies. In most cases, women who are found doing such work are widows who have to take on this responsibility to feed her children.
Second of all, there are certain tasks more suited to the feminine gender due to their delicate nature. One good example is the issue of pregnancy. Women are not recommended to engage in rigorous tasks that require physicality in order to avoid any adverse effect on their anatomy. Such repercussions include miscarriages due to the stress the foetus is subjected to. Also, women - who are often the home runners and are usually the first teachers of their kids - have a higher tendency to excel at tasks that require a persuasiveness and a touch of delicacy. Pregnant women will usually find a female gynaecologist more relatable than her male counterpart due to the obvious reason that she is better positioned to feel what they feel. Tasks such as these do not require sheer strength and muscle power. Moreover, in the times of war, women are more suited to handle tasks such as nursing the wounded and providing food for ravished soldiers.
However, there are certain reasons that can be used to challenge the aforementioned position. From history, women have been known to achieve much more than men while executing tasks that were mostly unarguably masculine. Also, the notion that men have more pronounced attributes with respect to physicality might be greatly challenged when we consider that these physical attributes can be acquired through processes such as workout routines. That is, the initial nature of women does not preclude them from acquiring these physical attributes over time. Likewise, a man who does not make the conscious effort to stay fit might find himself not suited to physical tasks that hardworking females make find easy to execute.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 163, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'recommended engaging'.
Suggestion: recommended engaging
...s the issue of pregnancy. Women are not recommended to engage in rigorous tasks that require physical...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, likewise, moreover, second, so, while, such as, in most cases, to begin with, with respect to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 19.5258426966 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.4196629213 64% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 14.8657303371 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 11.3162921348 159% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 33.0505617978 112% => OK
Preposition: 64.0 58.6224719101 109% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 12.9106741573 39% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2295.0 2235.4752809 103% => OK
No of words: 459.0 442.535393258 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0 5.05705443957 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.62863751936 4.55969084622 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65340904525 2.79657885939 95% => OK
Unique words: 230.0 215.323595506 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.501089324619 0.4932671777 102% => OK
syllable_count: 738.9 704.065955056 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.2370786517 104% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.838232795 60.3974514979 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.285714286 118.986275619 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8571428571 23.4991977007 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.90476190476 5.21951772744 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.83258426966 145% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.238132184679 0.243740707755 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0755088097633 0.0831039109588 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0625760042095 0.0758088955206 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158947658185 0.150359130593 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0791164746534 0.0667264976115 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 14.1392134831 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 48.8420337079 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 12.1743820225 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.72 12.1639044944 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.88 8.38706741573 106% => OK
difficult_words: 122.0 100.480337079 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.8971910112 97% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 83.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 6
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