Large companies use sports events to promote their products. Some people think this has a negative impact on sports.
To what extent do you agree or disagree.
As the old adages goes," men are not distributed by the things but by the views which they take them off." The contentious issue at present is about the large organizations who sponsors the sports event to promote their goods is beneficial or non-beneficial on sports. People espouse the notion that adverse effect on sports. I opine that it is positive impact on sports for the promotion of products events.
To begin with, proponents think there will be the ruin of the sports tradition because the citizens will watch the products only and they will not see the games which are being played in the stadium. Furthermore, the companies who use sports events is the waste of resources as they have to spend abound of money for the advertisement whereas sometimes the businesses use the taglines which are not good for society and there is conflict between the cohort of peoples. For example, A survey of 2020 elucidates that 45% of mobile brands company waste 500 U.S. dollars annually for the banners and hoarding in the world.
Secondly, I vehemently believe that the plethora of populations watched the sports event on the quotidian basis and watch the products in stadium in order it will help them to impart the knowledge about the new launch of the goods in the market. Similarly, if the goods are advertised in sports event regularly, then the netizens will purchase it so there will aggrandize in the sales of the goods and also it will ameliorate the job opportunities. To exemplify, the report of 2019 illustrates that 45% of the teenagers watch the advertisement in cricket stadium and buy it from market.
In conclusion, from an overall perspective without a shadow of a doubt, I am inclined to believe that there is negative effect on sports rather there are myriads positive aspects which is goods for the sports events.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, second, secondly, similarly, so, then, whereas, for example, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1536.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 314.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.89171974522 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20951839842 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72075191322 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.519108280255 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 469.8 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 20.2975951904 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 71.5542451571 49.4020404114 145% => OK
Chars per sentence: 153.6 106.682146367 144% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.4 20.7667163134 151% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.7 7.06120827912 166% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.225716309823 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0909129811249 0.084324248473 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0622212883529 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135996913086 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0445857329524 0.056905535591 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.3 13.0946893788 132% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.47 50.2224549098 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.67 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.15 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.1190380762 142% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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