In some countries, many more people are choosing to live alone nowadays than in the past. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?
Living alone indeed has tended to rise now. While many people suppose that it is a significant positive development. I believe that this is negative growth for various reasons.
On the one hand, deciding to live independently might be beneficial for many people and society. Firstly, because of the self-managing of all of the problems in their life, such as paying living, room rental, and eating every day and every month, they are forced to become more mature and responsible. If they still stay at their parent's home, they might rely on their parent's parental allowance, even becoming a family burden. Secondly, this tendency goes up relentlessly, housing needs continue to develop significantly. This means can benefit the construction industry, estate agents, and ultimately the prospering nation as a whole.
On the other hand, in my opinion, I predict this tendency might be negative growth soon. The first reason is that it involves the first view as I mentioned above, that we will feel like we are abandoned in some time because of self-managing and arranging everything without being reliant on any help for our parents or someone else. Even some people can deal with severe depression if they can not solve many necessary problems for a long time. Additionally, the rising model of affordable housing is synonymous with poor quality infrastructures going up. It causes the urban landscape to be seriously affected such as residential imbalance.
In conclusion, While choosing alone still was recognized as an advantage for many people, I still believe that this tendency contains more potential negative things.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
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Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, still, while, even so, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1376.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 262.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25190839695 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86759868107 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.625954198473 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 440.1 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.1505370795 49.4020404114 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.2857142857 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7142857143 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.64285714286 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.202698458545 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0700267190254 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0562716161172 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143534081636 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.061364521499 0.056905535591 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.17 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.05 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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