You have received a letter from your bank, asking you to acknowledge receipt of a new bank card. However, the card was missing from the envelope.
Write a letter to the bank's head office. In your letter:
explain why you are writing
express concern about the missing card
ask them what they intend to do
Dear Mr. Sharma,
My name is Shwatank Bhasin, and I am one of the trusted customer's of your bank for past ten years. However, I am writing this letter in order to complaint you about the missing debit card which I requested from the bank yesterday via express post services. Therefore, I request you to kindly take an immediate action on the same from this letter.
I requested for a new debit card because my current card got expired last week. For my work, I have to travelled a lot and I need to make transactions in cash, and the quick medium of cash I could get only from debit card by using ATM machines. Due to this reason, I requested for a new debit card on immediate purpose by paying extra fee to the bank.
Yesterday, when I opened the envelope, I checked that the card was missing, and It was surprisingly shocking moment I had ever seen in my life with such kind of service from your bank. I am concerned and worried about my account's security in your bank.
Hence, I request you to please disable my new requested debit card, and grant me a newly debit card as soon as possible. It's really hard for me to go on my work with limited amount of cash.
I am looking forward for a prompt action from your end.
Yours sincerely,
Shwatank Bhasin
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 232, Rule ID: ATM_MACHINE[2]
Message: This phrase is redundant ('M' stands for 'machine'). Use simply 'ATMs'.
Suggestion: ATMs
...could get only from debit card by using ATM machines. Due to this reason, I requested for a ...
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Line 9, column 82, Rule ID: A_RB_NN[1]
Message: You used an adverb ('newly') instead an adjective, or a noun ('debit') instead of another adjective.
... new requested debit card, and grant me a newly debit card as soon as possible. Its really ha...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, however, if, look, really, so, therefore, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 32.9175257732 115% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 26.3917525773 121% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1039.0 937.175257732 111% => OK
No of words: 235.0 206.0 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.42127659574 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91531732006 3.78020617076 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40418376847 2.54303337028 95% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 127.690721649 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.574468085106 0.622605031667 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 315.0 290.88556701 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.463917525773 862% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.9227732398 44.8134815571 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.5833333333 76.5299724578 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5833333333 16.8248392259 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.66666666667 4.34317383033 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.333476849186 0.216113520407 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.127855625451 0.0766984524023 167% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0840090327364 0.0603063233224 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.18113030508 0.12726935374 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.100931432831 0.0580467560999 174% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 8.37731958763 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 77.57 70.7449484536 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.36 8.71597938144 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.54 7.59969072165 99% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 41.2886597938 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.