Some people think that all university students should study whatever they like. Others believe that they should only be allowed to study subjects that will be useful in the future, such as those related to science and technology. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
In the world nowadays, people have different views about choices of students in univiersity. While some people think that undergraduated students should only choose course that have advantages in future, I personally believe that they can study what they want.
There are various reasons why people believe that universities should offer the job that useful in the future. For instance, jobs such as doctor, engineer or things that related to technology and science provide more job oppurtunities than others. Pupils should concentrate on good career to earn a good living, career promotion and future prosperity. In this day and age, by forcing them to study the useful subject, the government will have human resources who are intelligent and can improve the country, economic growth, focus on scientific , technology or invent machines.
In spite of these arguments, I believe that students should be allowed to choose their preferred areas of study. In my opinion, passion and inspiration can determine their lifes so by studying which they are like will bring benefits.Nobody not know which area of knowledge will be useful in the future so we should focus all. Besides, undergraduated students will be creative while paying attention to what they good at. For example, if we allow students to study the subjects that useful so some subjects such as history or art will not in school curriculumn. Without art or history teenagers do not have knowledge about their country’s achievements in the past or enable pupils time to relax by drawing.
In conclusion, there are many good reasons both for and against study subjects that will be useful in the future, but I believe that to study what they want is the right to do.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, if, so, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1445.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08802816901 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7410538892 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.538732394366 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 451.8 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.9046099569 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.416666667 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6666666667 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.83333333333 7.06120827912 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.482133411514 0.244688304435 197% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.160068024621 0.084324248473 190% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0910039526965 0.0667982634062 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.277487271756 0.151304729494 183% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0476590087478 0.056905535591 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.54 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.45 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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