Around the world, many adults are working from home, and more children are beginning to study from home because technology has become cheaper and more accessible.
Do you think this is a positive or negative development? (Write and Improve)
At the present time, with the booming of advanced science and technology, working and studying from home are becoming one of the latest trends. Apparently, the pros and cons of this tendency are still controversial with many posible reasons for each side. Personally, I argue that working from home is a positive development because it enables us to save time and take care of our family.
In the first place, it is noticebable that people can save a great deal of time from commuting and parking when they work and study from home. Commuting between home and office normally will take people from 15 minutes to 2 hours a day, or even longer, which depends on the distance between two places and the current traffic. Moreover, even when people already reach to the working location, finding a place to park is still a nightmare owning to the fact that they have to nagivate the route in a huge car park, and this can be worse in rush hours with numerous cars around.
Not only enable people to save much time, working from home also allows people to take care of their family better. For instance, parents and childrend might spend time having snacks together and discussing about the work during the breaktime. This helps to build the connection among family members stronger in comparision with having short conversations at dinner time after functioning at two different locations the whole day. Furthermore, when people stay at home, they are always available to receive delivering parcels and numerous house bills which are usually sent during the daytime when people are at their office.
In conclusion, although people still argue about the negative effects of working and studying from home, the advantages are still far outweight the disadvantages.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, first, furthermore, if, moreover, so, still, for instance, in conclusion, in the first place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1466.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 295.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96949152542 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51250249221 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.569491525424 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 458.1 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 39.5137804187 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.272727273 106.682146367 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.8181818182 20.7667163134 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0 7.06120827912 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.220394728439 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0993786150731 0.084324248473 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0698948959566 0.0667982634062 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156346645014 0.151304729494 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.06084344819 0.056905535591 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.35 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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