The chart below shows the percentage of households in owned and rented accommodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011

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The chart below shows the percentage of households in owned and rented accommodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011.

The bar chart illustrates the proportion of owned and rented English and Welsh accommodation from 1918 to 2011.

Overall, the percentage of households that rented and owned their accommodation in England and Wales fluctuated in two opposite trends. It is worth noting that the figure of households rented accommodation was highest in 1918 and lowest in 2001, while that of households owned accommodation was in a reserve order.

The proportion of people owning their accommodation was around 23% in 1918 and fluctuated in an increasing trend over a period of 94 years. This figure rose steadily by 45% and reached a peak at 68% in 2001, then decreased marginally to about 63% in 2011. On the other hand, the percentage of people renting accommodation fluctuated in a decreasing trend between 1918 and 2011. The figure fell considerably from nearly 88% in 1918 to around 31% in 2001. After that, it rose slowly by about 5% after a decade.

From 1918 to 1961, the proportion of households in rented accommodation was higher than that of households owning their accommodation, about 19% to 48%. In 1971, the figures accounted for the same rate, at 50%. Then, the percentage of people having their own accommodation experienced an increase and was more than that of those renting accommodation, up to 38%.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
then, while, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 5.60731707317 250% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 33.7804878049 148% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 3.97073170732 327% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1096.0 965.302439024 114% => OK
No of words: 217.0 196.424390244 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05069124424 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8380880478 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04116043622 2.65546596893 115% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.483870967742 0.547539520022 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 313.2 283.868780488 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.33902439024 184% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 3.36585365854 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.5364483475 43.030603864 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.6363636364 112.824112599 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7272727273 22.9334400587 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.72727272727 5.23603664747 52% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.421840752147 0.215688989381 196% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.168413594369 0.103423049105 163% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.131879050647 0.0843802449381 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.286770372248 0.15604864568 184% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0804176898477 0.0819641961636 98% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.2329268293 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 61.2550243902 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.3012195122 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.01 11.4140731707 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.13 8.06136585366 88% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 40.7170731707 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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