An international development organization, in response to a vitamin A deficiency among people in the impoverished nation of Tagus, has engineered a new breed of millet high in vitamin A. While seeds for this new type of millet cost more, farmers will be paid subsidies for farming the new variety of millet. Since millet is already a staple food in Tagus, people will readily adopt the new variety. To combat vitamin A deficiency, the government of Tagus should do everything it can to promote this new type of millet.
Write a response in which you discuss what questions would need to be answered to decide whether the recommendation is likely to have the predicted result. Be sure to explain how the answers to these questions would help to evaluate the recommendation.
The author recommended in this argument that people of the country Tagus will eradicate their Vitamin A deficieny by using a hybrid millet . Some questions needs to be answered and few things to be clarified in order to prove this argument correct.
Firstly , would the subsidies paid by the government to the farmers sufficient to meet the financial needs of the farmers? The government could pay subsidies to the farmers but there are certain other expenses in order to grow a new crop .Some new crop might need more water and thus more electricity to pump the water, more yielding time compared with the old variant of millet which will further burden a farmer till it got reaped and the quantity of millets produced per piece of land ( i.e. square meters , hectares). Thus, the government need to yield the new millet with the help of the organisation as a trial and should consider all these factors while providing subsidies. If any of these got failed, then the farmers will return to the old ones in the next yielding cycle, which will not take away the Vitamin A deficiency from people.
Secondly , what is the basic amount of Vitamin A a person needed for one person? The organisation should also explicitly educate people on what should be proportion of new millets in their diet in order to combat vitamin A deficieny for all age categories of people
Finally , what if the new crops are more vulnerable to pests ? The officials should research on the vulnerability of the new millet variant to the pests and other predator animals. If the new ones are more weak, then the production capacity might be lowered even though the government providing subsidies.
In conclusion, if these questions were answered , then we could say that the argument is positive.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 114, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...will eradicate their Vitamin A deficieny by using a hybrid millet . Some questio...
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Line 1, column 140, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...in A deficieny by using a hybrid millet . Some questions needs to be answered an...
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Line 1, column 141, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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...n A deficieny by using a hybrid millet . Some questions needs to be answered and...
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Line 1, column 159, Rule ID: AGREEMENT_SENT_START[1]
Message: You should probably use 'need'.
Suggestion: need
...using a hybrid millet . Some questions needs to be answered and few things to be cla...
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... prove this argument correct. Firstly , would the subsidies paid by the governm...
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...her expenses in order to grow a new crop .Some new crop might need more water and ...
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Suggestion: Some
...r expenses in order to grow a new crop .Some new crop might need more water and thus...
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Line 3, column 489, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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...ty of millets produced per piece of land i.e. square meters , hectares. Thus, the...
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...in A deficiency from people. Secondly , what is the basic amount of Vitamin A a...
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Line 5, column 48, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
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...y , what is the basic amount of Vitamin A a person needed for one person? The organ...
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Line 5, column 48, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
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Suggestion: A; A
...y , what is the basic amount of Vitamin A a person needed for one person? The organ...
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Line 5, column 155, Rule ID: SHOULD_BE_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'proportioned'?
Suggestion: proportioned
...icitly educate people on what should be proportion of new millets in their diet in order t...
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Line 7, column 8, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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... all age categories of people Finally , what if the new crops are more vulnerab...
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Line 7, column 247, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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...weak, then the production capacity might be lowered even though the government pr...
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Line 9, column 48, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...lusion, if these questions were answered , then we could say that the argument is ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, then, thus, while, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 19.6327345309 51% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 12.9520958084 116% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 11.1786427146 54% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 13.6137724551 29% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 28.8173652695 42% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 55.5748502994 70% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 16.3942115768 67% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1470.0 2260.96107784 65% => OK
No of words: 302.0 441.139720559 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.86754966887 5.12650576532 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.56307096286 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58462008704 2.78398813304 93% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 204.123752495 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.523178807947 0.468620217663 112% => OK
syllable_count: 455.4 705.55239521 65% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59920159681 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 4.96107784431 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 8.76447105788 57% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.70958083832 111% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.67365269461 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.22255489022 24% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 19.7664670659 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 22.8473053892 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 86.1821058683 57.8364921388 149% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.636363636 119.503703932 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.4545454545 23.324526521 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.54545454545 5.70786347227 150% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.15768463074 97% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 5.25449101796 305% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.20758483034 49% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 6.88822355289 87% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.67664670659 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.31479821002 0.218282227539 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.114190749584 0.0743258471296 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0611295365358 0.0701772020484 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153327250809 0.128457276422 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0790475814796 0.0628817314937 126% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 14.3799401198 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 48.3550499002 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.1628742515 123% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 12.197005988 103% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 12.5979740519 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.27 8.32208582834 99% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 98.500998004 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 12.3882235529 109% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 11.1389221557 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.9071856287 109% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 114, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...will eradicate their Vitamin A deficieny by using a hybrid millet . Some questio...
^^
Line 1, column 140, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...in A deficieny by using a hybrid millet . Some questions needs to be answered an...
^^
Line 1, column 141, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...n A deficieny by using a hybrid millet . Some questions needs to be answered and...
^^
Line 1, column 159, Rule ID: AGREEMENT_SENT_START[1]
Message: You should probably use 'need'.
Suggestion: need
...using a hybrid millet . Some questions needs to be answered and few things to be cla...
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Line 3, column 8, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... prove this argument correct. Firstly , would the subsidies paid by the governm...
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Line 3, column 239, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...her expenses in order to grow a new crop .Some new crop might need more water and ...
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Line 3, column 241, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Some
...r expenses in order to grow a new crop .Some new crop might need more water and thus...
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Line 3, column 489, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ty of millets produced per piece of land i.e. square meters , hectares. Thus, the...
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Line 3, column 509, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ed per piece of land i.e. square meters , hectares. Thus, the government need to ...
^^
Line 5, column 9, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...in A deficiency from people. Secondly , what is the basic amount of Vitamin A a...
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Line 5, column 48, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: A
...y , what is the basic amount of Vitamin A a person needed for one person? The organ...
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Line 5, column 48, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'A' or 'a' is left.
Suggestion: A; A
...y , what is the basic amount of Vitamin A a person needed for one person? The organ...
^^^
Line 5, column 155, Rule ID: SHOULD_BE_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'proportioned'?
Suggestion: proportioned
...icitly educate people on what should be proportion of new millets in their diet in order t...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 8, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... all age categories of people Finally , what if the new crops are more vulnerab...
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Line 7, column 247, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...weak, then the production capacity might be lowered even though the government pr...
^^
Line 9, column 48, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...lusion, if these questions were answered , then we could say that the argument is ...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, then, thus, while, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 19.6327345309 51% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 12.9520958084 116% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 11.1786427146 54% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 13.6137724551 29% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 28.8173652695 42% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 55.5748502994 70% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 16.3942115768 67% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1470.0 2260.96107784 65% => OK
No of words: 302.0 441.139720559 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.86754966887 5.12650576532 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.56307096286 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58462008704 2.78398813304 93% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 204.123752495 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.523178807947 0.468620217663 112% => OK
syllable_count: 455.4 705.55239521 65% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59920159681 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 4.96107784431 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 8.76447105788 57% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.70958083832 111% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.67365269461 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.22255489022 24% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 19.7664670659 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 22.8473053892 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 86.1821058683 57.8364921388 149% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.636363636 119.503703932 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.4545454545 23.324526521 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.54545454545 5.70786347227 150% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.15768463074 97% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 5.25449101796 305% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.20758483034 49% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 6.88822355289 87% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.67664670659 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.31479821002 0.218282227539 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.114190749584 0.0743258471296 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0611295365358 0.0701772020484 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153327250809 0.128457276422 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0790475814796 0.0628817314937 126% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 14.3799401198 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 48.3550499002 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.1628742515 123% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 12.197005988 103% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 12.5979740519 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.27 8.32208582834 99% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 98.500998004 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 12.3882235529 109% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 11.1389221557 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.9071856287 109% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.