Some people think that instead of preventing climate change, we need to find a way to live with it. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
There are many arguments around climate change, which is a big concern in the world. While some individuals think that we can adapt to live with this, I disagree with this opinion because climate change brings many drawbacks to our planet.
To begin with, there are many disadvantages of climate change, which can lead to the extinction of animals and humans. For example, a consequence of climate change is the drought in Europe in the summer of 2022, which was the culprit of a series of forest fires there. Because of this, thousands of animal species lose their home and the heat from the fire promoted the process of global warming. Therefore, people should prevent climate change instead of finding a way to live with it.
There are several effective solutions that I can find to prevent, or at least mitigate climate change. One measure is that governments could give some policies to reduce deforestation. As we know, trees absorb carbon dioxide, which causes climate change, and emit oxygen, an indispensable gas for human and animal life. Thus, reducing the cutting of trees is a way to prevent the change in the climate. Another solution is using public transport. Private vehicles emit a large amount of carbon dioxide and cause traffic congestion, thus people can commute by public transport to reduce the emission of carbon dioxide as well as traffic jams.
In conclusion, I believe that people can't live with climate change, so we need to take action to prevent it to minimize its consequences.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 38, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
... In conclusion, I believe that people cant live with climate change, so we need to...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, therefore, thus, well, while, as for, at least, for example, in conclusion, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1264.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 255.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9568627451 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56746269056 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.576470588235 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 404.1 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.3816092549 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.2307692308 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6153846154 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.38461538462 7.06120827912 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.325075597342 0.244688304435 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.114597616605 0.084324248473 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.122352908104 0.0667982634062 183% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.206164443355 0.151304729494 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0464927762111 0.056905535591 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.54 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.