Studies show that crime rates are lower among those with educational degrees. Therefore the best way to reduce the crime rate is to educate criminals while they are still in prison. Do you agree or disagree?
Studies show that crime rates are lower among those with educational
degrees. Therefore, the best way to reduce the crime rate is to educate
criminals while they are still in prison. To what extent do you agree or
disagree?
Criminal issues are becoming increasingly popular among certain
demographics of society. Studies illustrate the facts that educated people
are less involved towards criminal activities, therefore if we want to
dwindle crime rate we have to educate criminals when they are in prison. In
this essay, I will argue why educational practices plays a vital role in
reducing crimes within society.
People inability to understand the disparity between good and evil because
of lack of eduction is main root of crime. If government built enough
rehabilitation center in prison, this will improve criminal mindset in a
possitive way. In previous old stone age, people living in caves and kill
other fellow being to fulfill their hunger but as they move towards
advancement in educataion they organised laws of protection. These laws
bounded them to social bonds in which they have to honor others right to
live and must abondoned Darwins theory of survival. Their journey towards
evolution emphasis the idea that the more Educated they became,The less
they are involved in crimes.
Another possible way to reduce crime rate is to curb the natural instinct of
man through Meditation. It is a universal fact that every man is more prone
to evil than good. Every prison center should teach the basics teachings of
meditation to accused. In USA and Canada Crime rate is relatively low as
compared to third world countries because in their prison camps they
started preaching the Buddha's technique of meditation to their prisoners.
Wrapping it up, If we want to ameliorate society we have to educate
criminals in multifarious ways . Only in this way, I reckon that we could see
a luminious future for upcoming generation.
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Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 19, column 63, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , The
... idea that the more Educated they became,The less they are involved in crimes. ...
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Line 21, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: They
...e more Educated they became,The less they are involved in crimes. Another poss...
^^^^
Line 30, column 31, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
... educate criminals in multifarious ways . Only in this way, I reckon that we coul...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, still, therefore, third, while, i reckon
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1671.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 318.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.25471698113 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22286093782 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65651000939 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.600628930818 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 531.0 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.4284457691 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.2941176471 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7058823529 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.11764705882 7.06120827912 44% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 28.0 4.38176352705 639% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 3.9879759519 301% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.492726748118 0.244688304435 201% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.151687541915 0.084324248473 180% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.167648567885 0.0667982634062 251% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112414346894 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.139455199135 0.056905535591 245% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.17 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.95 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 19, column 63, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , The
... idea that the more Educated they became,The less they are involved in crimes. ...
^^^^
Line 21, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: They
...e more Educated they became,The less they are involved in crimes. Another poss...
^^^^
Line 30, column 31, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
... educate criminals in multifarious ways . Only in this way, I reckon that we coul...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, still, therefore, third, while, i reckon
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1671.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 318.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.25471698113 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22286093782 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65651000939 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.600628930818 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 531.0 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.4284457691 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.2941176471 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7058823529 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.11764705882 7.06120827912 44% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 28.0 4.38176352705 639% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 3.9879759519 301% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.492726748118 0.244688304435 201% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.151687541915 0.084324248473 180% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.167648567885 0.0667982634062 251% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112414346894 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.139455199135 0.056905535591 245% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.17 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.95 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.