Rich countries often give money to poorer countries, but it does not solve poverty. Therefore, developed countries should give other types of help to the poor countries rather than financial aid.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is argued that poor nations could not be financially helped by the wealthier to tackle with poverty and better actions must be taken. Personally, I am completely in agreement with this point of view.
On the one hand, supporting by monetary help to poor countries might not be as effective as people expect for a variety of reason. If money go to impoverished inhabitants, they sometimes become over reliance on this aid. It is no point that individuals have to work hard to pay for their life or they might spend money on wasting things without thinking because of surely receiving funds from government. But more serious is that most financial aid is usually utilized for the right propose due to the corruption of politicians for serving their own interests. This means that money will not come directly to the poorest in those nations not to positively affect them and even widening the gap between the rich and the poor in one country.
On the other hand, I convict that there is a myriad of measures for rich nations to give some help to poor countries. One simple solution can be taken is a stimulus to their education systems in order to create more opportunities for the poor. For example, offering scholarships to brilliant pupils to study in developed countries makes a significant contribution to their community when students go back and contribute for their hometown. Additionally, emigrants can invest in their home countries or donate for the disadvantaged in their local areas. This would be a much more stable and balanced development for poor countries.
In conclusion, I totally approve the idea that rich countries must support poorer regions by other aids instead of money. Alleviation of poverty should give priority to the roots which is human element, rather than any steady growth in their economies.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, for example, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1533.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 308.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97727272727 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18926351222 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77369846734 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.590909090909 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 474.3 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.1382552094 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.5 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.14285714286 7.06120827912 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.228638369008 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0803459953629 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0621276804544 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149901104562 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0810143265433 0.056905535591 142% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.09 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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