Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it.
Discuss both these views and give your opinion.
Handful of individuals believe that the most effective method to convince people to purchase goods is advertising, whilst other hold opinion that advertisement is ignored by people. Although, some might ignore adverts, I believe influencers and extreme level of advertisement force people to buy products.
With increase in consumerism more products are fed to normal people indirectly and indirectly by influencers. People always want to have luxurious life and the celebrities or social media star are mostly found living the life of dream. By using tricky advertisements and angel like living standard people are lured into believing such success is just possible due to luxury products. For instance, lei it be under-developed or developed country like Nepal or India brand is always linked with popular celebrities, which not only convince more people to watch adverts, but persuade them to purchase products due to such stronger fan following. Thus, change in strategies and advertise campaigns do attract people to use the products.
Advertisements are so common now that every smart devices advertise products using various methods. Most engaging platforms including social sites, websites, blogs, video sites and news portals are full of the promotions that people tend to find ways to ignore them, either by using extensions or simply by focusing elsewhere when showing ads. Not only this, even on the digital boards people focus less, and when playing advertisements on television they tend to be busy on their other chores.
In conclusion, I believe luxurious living and manipulation of advertisement indirectly or directly force people to purchase items, some even might ignore those promotion, but other factors compel them to purchase the goods in different phase of their life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 406, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'is'?
Suggestion: is
...o luxury products. For instance, lei it be under-developed or developed country li...
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Line 4, column 155, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this promotion' or 'those promotions'?
Suggestion: this promotion; those promotions
... purchase items, some even might ignore those promotion, but other factors compel them to purch...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, thus, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1520.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 279.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.44802867384 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8711489613 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.591397849462 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 477.0 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 60.5577383116 49.4020404114 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.181818182 106.682146367 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.3636363636 20.7667163134 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.18181818182 7.06120827912 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.243072962276 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104481572476 0.084324248473 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0518515737925 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154770555235 0.151304729494 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0409848773328 0.056905535591 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.9 13.0946893788 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.63 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.4 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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