Around the world, many adults are working from home, and more children are beginning to study from home because technology has become cheaper and more accessible.
Do you think this is a positive or negative development?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
Because technical equipment are more affordable in our digital age, a growing number of individuals of all ages are working or learning from home. It seems to me that this phenomenon cuts both ways and we will discuss more in this essay.
On the one hand, current research suggests that home working, supported by smart gadgets, enables the majority of young people and children to live a better balanced existence since it is less time-consuming in many ways. We can see that even while today's freelancers, such as content writers, can work well from a distance, they still have enough quality time at home. Furthermore, the introduction of online courses with low-cost offerings is stated to present young people with a plethora of chances to advance intellectually. In the past, schools and libraries were the only places where children could learn. In short, I believe that the ubiquity of contemporary technologies benefits both working people and students.
On the other hand, it appears that this evolution will have two widely noted implications. First, for certain businesses, the convenience of homeworking is closely related to the possible danger in any organization, which is the high probability of vital data being disclosed as companies' computers are stolen or spied. Second, online learning is thought to deprive any individual of the basic physical activity required to stay healthy. In the long run, this style may have a negative impact on students' physical and mental well-being. In summary, the growing trend of working and learning from home may bring unique challenges for businesses and students.
To summarize, this position is a double-edged sword. Despite the aforementioned issues, I believe this growth will eventually become popular due to the constant advancement of technology.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, may, second, still, well, while, in short, in summary, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1528.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 288.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.30555555556 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94024858276 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.642361111111 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 479.7 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.1557846145 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.142857143 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5714285714 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.21428571429 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.21533624153 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.062946980459 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0511716805368 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121079756984 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0471459655343 0.056905535591 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.84 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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