The best way to teach children to cooperate is through team sports at school. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Child education is receiving more and more attention as society evolves. Several opinions claim that provoking team-building sports among children could be advantageous. I totally believe that this could be immensely beneficial for young people.
The sportsmanship endorsement, however, has been subjected to a range of opposite viewpoints primarily from concerned parents as it becomes more popular. These people claimed that sports could be hazardous for their kids since those activities are physically intensive. In addition to this, some even believed participating in sports could distract students from focusing on their studies.
Having said that, I strongly believe in the importance of sports in general education. Firstly, taking part in physical activities would make students appear to be more active physically and mentally. Furthermore, by involving every student in the class, you will discover many hidden or unpolished athletes. Moreover, the pre-built teamwork acquired by youngsters simplifies their career paths since more and more professions require this qualification.
In conclusion, even if a few people hinder school sports, I believe the pros will outweigh the cons. To integrate sports into schools is to generate opportunities for potential talents and well-prepared students for the future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, well, in addition, in conclusion, in general
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 41.998997996 55% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1135.0 1615.20841683 70% => OK
No of words: 194.0 315.596192385 61% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.85051546392 5.12529762239 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73207559907 4.20363070211 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03175614602 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 176.041082164 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.690721649485 0.561755894193 123% => OK
syllable_count: 344.7 506.74238477 68% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.1193502308 49.4020404114 49% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 94.5833333333 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1666666667 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.33333333333 7.06120827912 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0816355830318 0.244688304435 33% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0315794878628 0.084324248473 37% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.035194150211 0.0667982634062 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0529541874073 0.151304729494 35% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0185177888935 0.056905535591 33% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.31 50.2224549098 76% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.35 12.4159519038 132% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.05 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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