A recently issued twenty-year study on headaches suffered by the residents of Mentia investigated the possible therapeutic effect of consuming salicylates. Salicylates are members of the same chemical family as aspirin, a medicine used to treat headaches. Although many foods are naturally rich in salicylates, food-processing companies also add salicylates to foods as preservatives. The twenty-year study found a correlation between the rise in the commercial use of salicylates and a steady decline in the average number of headaches reported by study participants. At the time when the study concluded, food-processing companies had just discovered that salicylates can also be used as flavor additives for foods, and, as a result, many companies plan to do so. Based on these study results, some health experts predict that residents of Mentia will suffer even fewer headaches in the future.
Write a response in which you discuss what questions would need to be answered in order to decide whether the prediction and the argument on which it is based are reasonable. Be sure to explain how the answers to these questions would help to evaluate the prediction.
The argument contends that use of salicylates, members of the same chemical family as
aspirin can be used for treating headaches. The author further states that it has been
proved from the study involving the people of are suffering from headaches and are residing
in Mentia. Based on the results from the study of people of Mentia, author asserts
salicylates can be used as flavor additives for food which in turn will help in
curing the headaches of people.
Firstly, the arguments asserts that Salicylates, a medicine can used as medicine and is
an alternative for Aspirin. But there is mention of the difference in the effectiveness
of Salicylates and no comparison has been made. There should be an experiment involving
a set of people who should be given both Salicylates and Aspirin and compare the effectiveness
on parameters of efficacy of both the medicines. There may be case that Salicylates may
not be effective for people of certain age. So, the author should explain the difference
between both the medicines in detail.
Secondly, the argument has not mentioned whether there is any side effects for Salicylates
compared to Aspirin. There may be a case that there may be more side effects of Salicylates
compared to Apsirin. Also, the author has not mentioned the number of people being tested
for proving the efficacy of Salicylates. It may be the case that the study has results based
on only 20 people of Mentia. In that case, the result that Salicylates is effective is invalid.
Finally, the author contends that Salicylates should added as preservative in foods but
there may be a fact that not many people like Salicylates being added. Though, Salicylates
can be used for curing headaches. There may be a case that a person may not consume food
which contains Salicylates because he is not having any headache. That means even if the
Salicylates proved to be effective, it should be not be added in all the foods because
some people may not like the food containing Salicylates because it may cause side effects
for them. Just because Salicylates is used for for curing headaches does not mean it
should be added in all the foods.
In conclusion, the author should show more details regarding the efficacy of Salicylates regarding the
number of people being tested. The argument should also mention the exact difference
between the efficacy of both Aspirin and Salicylates and side effects of both. It should
further decide adding Salicylates in foods is really helpful for people based on the poll
of all the people of Mentia. If the above points are taken into consideration, then the
argument will become valid.
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Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 86, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
..., members of the same chemical family as aspirin can be used for treating headach...
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Line 2, column 87, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e author further states that it has been proved from the study involving the peop...
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Line 5, column 80, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ives for food which in turn will help in curing the headaches of people. First...
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Line 12, column 88, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
.... There may be case that Salicylates may not be effective for people of certain a...
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Line 13, column 89, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...the author should explain the difference between both the medicines in detail. ...
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Line 26, column 87, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...be not be added in all the foods because some people may not like the food contai...
^^^
Line 28, column 44, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: for
... them. Just because Salicylates is used for for curing headaches does not mean it shou...
^^^^^^^
Line 32, column 85, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...should also mention the exact difference between the efficacy of both Aspirin and...
^^^
Line 35, column 88, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s are taken into consideration, then the argument will become valid.
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, if, may, really, regarding, second, secondly, so, then, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 32.0 19.6327345309 163% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 25.0 12.9520958084 193% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 11.1786427146 81% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 13.6137724551 110% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 28.8173652695 69% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 55.5748502994 92% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 16.3942115768 67% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2260.0 2260.96107784 100% => OK
No of words: 445.0 441.139720559 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07865168539 5.12650576532 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.59293186426 4.56307096286 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73385910535 2.78398813304 98% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 204.123752495 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.359550561798 0.468620217663 77% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 725.4 705.55239521 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59920159681 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.96107784431 81% => OK
Article: 13.0 8.76447105788 148% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.70958083832 37% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.67365269461 60% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.22255489022 213% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 19.7664670659 111% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.8473053892 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.2962892282 57.8364921388 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.727272727 119.503703932 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2272727273 23.324526521 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.77272727273 5.70786347227 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 32.0 5.15768463074 620% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 9.0 5.25449101796 171% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.20758483034 61% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 6.88822355289 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.67664670659 150% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.231355511546 0.218282227539 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0938722189073 0.0743258471296 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.051525346437 0.0701772020484 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.07687199569 0.128457276422 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0484467786797 0.0628817314937 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 14.3799401198 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 48.3550499002 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.1628742515 123% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 12.197005988 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 12.5979740519 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.11 8.32208582834 85% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 98.500998004 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 12.3882235529 89% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.1389221557 90% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.9071856287 109% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 86, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
..., members of the same chemical family as aspirin can be used for treating headach...
^^^
Line 2, column 87, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e author further states that it has been proved from the study involving the peop...
^^^
Line 5, column 80, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ives for food which in turn will help in curing the headaches of people. First...
^^^
Line 12, column 88, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
.... There may be case that Salicylates may not be effective for people of certain a...
^^^
Line 13, column 89, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...the author should explain the difference between both the medicines in detail. ...
^^^
Line 26, column 87, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...be not be added in all the foods because some people may not like the food contai...
^^^
Line 28, column 44, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: for
... them. Just because Salicylates is used for for curing headaches does not mean it shou...
^^^^^^^
Line 32, column 85, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...should also mention the exact difference between the efficacy of both Aspirin and...
^^^
Line 35, column 88, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s are taken into consideration, then the argument will become valid.
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, if, may, really, regarding, second, secondly, so, then, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 32.0 19.6327345309 163% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 25.0 12.9520958084 193% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 11.1786427146 81% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 13.6137724551 110% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 28.8173652695 69% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 55.5748502994 92% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 16.3942115768 67% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2260.0 2260.96107784 100% => OK
No of words: 445.0 441.139720559 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07865168539 5.12650576532 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.59293186426 4.56307096286 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73385910535 2.78398813304 98% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 204.123752495 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.359550561798 0.468620217663 77% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 725.4 705.55239521 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59920159681 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.96107784431 81% => OK
Article: 13.0 8.76447105788 148% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.70958083832 37% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.67365269461 60% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.22255489022 213% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 19.7664670659 111% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.8473053892 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.2962892282 57.8364921388 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.727272727 119.503703932 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2272727273 23.324526521 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.77272727273 5.70786347227 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 32.0 5.15768463074 620% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 9.0 5.25449101796 171% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.20758483034 61% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 6.88822355289 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.67664670659 150% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.231355511546 0.218282227539 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0938722189073 0.0743258471296 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.051525346437 0.0701772020484 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.07687199569 0.128457276422 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0484467786797 0.0628817314937 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 14.3799401198 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 48.3550499002 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.1628742515 123% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 12.197005988 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 12.5979740519 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.11 8.32208582834 85% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 98.500998004 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 12.3882235529 89% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.1389221557 90% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.9071856287 109% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.